NOTE TO READER
CHAPTER 1- Thanks for taking the time to read the first part of Prynna and Dina's journey and discovery!! I hope you enjoy it and PLEASE feel free to offer any critiques or comments. Thanks again :)
<> BOOK 1 OF THE SHIFT IN POWER TRILOGY <>
(Edit: Don't let the length and the information-overload of chapter 4 detour you from the story. It's just a way to get you familiar with the village and their ways without having to write multiple chapters on the village itself. The rest of the story is focused on the journey. Thanks for reading!)









Hi T L P Jr.,
I recently went through your story The Shift In Power and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic.
I loved the scene in Chapter 2 where Prynna, the adventurous member of the Valti Village, hears an explosion and decides to venture beyond the trees, a place no villager has been in nearly a century. The moment she sets off with her sidekick, Dina, a male dog named after her deceased grandmother, is so vivid. It would be ideal for making a comic as it captures the thrill and determination of Prynna embarking on a dangerous journey into the unknown.
I specialize in adapting stories into manga/comics, and I’d love to bring your story to life as a comic/manga. No pressure, though, I think your work would look awesome in comic form. If you’re interested in a paid collaboration, I’d love to discuss bringing your story to life visually!
You can check out some of my recent work on my Portfolio. If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username - peterjones_90) so we can bring the story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!
Regards,
Peter