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The Midnight Men

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Summary

Another fever dream I wrote down.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Smash 

You hit the floor.

Crack

Your bones break.

Gasp

You take a breath in from your broken jaw.

I take the rag and stick it back into your mouth and stand back and watch.

Lies

I see a dark figure out in the hall move.

Silent crying.

Draw a knife and grin.

Gasp

Dragged in another body.

Screams

The fire roars in front of us.

Begging

Insane laughter from the cells.

Heartbeats are faster as they emerge from the darkness.

Fear

Unable to move, only able to watch.

Footsteps

Voices of the masses rise in a panic.

Unsettled

Praying that is bounced off deaf ears.

Heat

They are all theirs now.

Blood

A trail was leading from us to them.

Trembling

We all stand still and watch the last feast.

Regret

Hands sweat and eyes sting from the salt.

Gurgling

Still alive we hear it all and must watch.

Vanity

The chosen stand proudly but all our stomach sour from the sight.

Midnight

The clock rings, and it’s finished.

Choking

They vanish as soon as they appeared.

Sighs

Moon has begun to set for them.

Moreover, for us just another night, another mess to cover up.

More lives are gone, for them the midnight men.

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