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Breathless

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Summary

Hailey Whitestone has spent her life on the edges—quiet, unseen, hiding behind soft dresses and shy glances. Until the day she sees him. Sebastian Knight. Powerful. Untouchable. Perfect in his suit and effortless charm. He is everything she is not, and everything she cannot look away from. Too timid to speak, Hailey watches instead—at the coffee shop, the gym, the glass towers where he rules his world. A secret shadow, gathering courage she never quite finds. But Sebastian notices. And when he finally confronts her, his words are as sharp as his green eyes: Are you sure you want to play with fire? A single slip of paper. A whispered promise. A choice that could consume her. Because Sebastian Knight is not the flawless stranger she imagined. He is darker. Hungrier. And the moment she takes his hand, Hailey will discover that some obsessions don’t fade… They ignite. Breathless is a dark romance of dangerous attraction, whispered temptations, and the cost of surrendering to desire.

Genre
Erotica
Author
Marty
Status
Complete
Chapters
53
Rating
4.8 (12 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: The Stranger

The bell above the café door chimed again. Hailey Whitestone glanced up from the worn paperback resting between her fingers, more out of habit than curiosity.

She loved this ritual—sitting tucked away in the corner of the downtown café with a steaming cup of coffee and a book she may or may not be actually reading. The pages were often more of a shield than a distraction. What really captured her attention was the steady flow of people passing through. Strangers to everyone else, but to her, they became stories. A tired man in paint-spattered jeans was an artist on the verge of finishing his masterpiece. The woman in the navy skirt suit might be sneaking in caffeine before a meeting where her promotion hung in the balance. Hailey liked to imagine their lives, to fill in the empty spaces she would never dare to ask about.

It was safer that way—watching from a distance. Unseen.

The bell rang again. She lifted her eyes.

This time, her heart stumbled in her chest.

He stepped inside as though the world shifted to make space for him. Tall—easily over six feet—with broad shoulders that filled out the dark lines of his suit. His jacket hung perfectly, not a crease out of place, and when he moved the fabric seemed tailored to obey him. His hair was blonde, shorter along the sides, longer on top, styled back with just enough precision to make it look effortless. His skin was warm and tan, the kind that whispered of sun even in the depths of winter.

Hailey’s breath caught as her gaze lifted further, meeting his eyes. Green. Not just green, but sharp and vivid, like polished glass catching the light. Striking. Intense.

She nearly dropped her book.

There was someone with him, another man in a suit, speaking easily, their words threading low between them. She barely noticed. Everything else dulled against the singular presence of the stranger who seemed to command the air around him without lifting a finger. Confident. Self-assured. The kind of man who didn’t need to try. He only had to walk into a room and it bent around him.

She should have looked away. She knew she should. But her eyes clung to him as he moved through the line, his companion laughing at something he’d said, his own smile easy and practiced—the kind of charm that made people lean closer without realizing it.

He picked up his coffee, a casual flick of his wrist, and turned toward the door.

And then it happened.

His gaze cut across the café and found her.

Hailey’s heart leapt to her throat. For the briefest of moments—two seconds, maybe three—the world held its breath. His eyes on hers, unwavering, deliberate. Not a glance. A connection. As though he had known she was there all along.

Heat rushed to her face. She gripped her book, pressing it hard against her chest as if the cover could shield the frantic gallop of her heart. She was certain he could see it in her eyes, the way her breath stuttered, the way her body betrayed her calm exterior.

Then, just as quickly, he broke the moment. His mouth curved in that easy smile as he turned back to his companion, slipping seamlessly into their conversation as though nothing had passed between them at all. He pushed the door open, the bell chiming in his wake, and vanished into the noise of the city outside.

The café fell back into its usual rhythm—the hiss of the espresso machine, the murmur of voices, the shuffle of feet across tile.

Hailey sat frozen in the corner, clutching her book against her chest, her pulse still hammering. Her lips parted as though she might breathe his name if only she knew it. Her face burned, her thoughts scrambled, but beneath it all something else stirred—something she didn’t dare name.

She tried to recover, to convince herself it had been nothing. Just a look. Just a man. But the image of him lingered, seared into her mind: the sculpted lines of his suit, the curve of his smile, and those eyes—green, piercing, unshakable.

Hailey Whitestone was many things: shy, reserved, a woman content to live in the background. But as she sat there in her quiet corner with her flushed cheeks and trembling hands, she realized something she had never admitted to herself before.

Sometimes, watching wasn’t enough.

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Just finished Chapter 1 of Breathless and wow the atmosphere is spot on. Hailey’s quiet, almost invisible life in that café felt so intimate, like you could hear her heart beating when Sebastian walked in. The way he’s described tailored suit, commanding presence, those sharp green eyes immediately sets him apart, and that brief, deliberate eye contact across the room? Perfect tension. I love how Hailey’s book becomes a shield for her, and yet in that moment, even that barrier feels useless. It’s a strong opening that makes you feel her awe, fear, and fascination all at once. I follow a lot of writers&artists on Tumblr/IG do you have an account I should check out?

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author

Love this from the start!😍😮‍💨👏🏻

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OOPS there goes her heart😱😱😱

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