What is your opinion?
Enjoyable
"This is actually quite good. The writing is great, with a few mistakes in spelling here in there but nothing too big. Toboron is amusing in his actions and thoughts and that's enjoyable. An issue I found, however, was that I'm not too sure on the look of the main character and the two females he encountered. Are they giant animals or human look-a-likes with animal traits. Where did Gwendal get wings? Another problem was I'm not too sure what all the characters are doing, and that can bug people. My final real problem, and this might just be due to taste, is the heavy-handed approach with Toboron's and Gemina's relationship. Comes off somewhat forced. But these problems, though significant, don't ruin the story. And it's overall quality is good. Can't wait to read another chapter."
Creative!
"No, I'm not writing this review to be incredibly lazy with the star rating - I have legitimate reasons. Firstly the plot. I felt as if at some times it is shaky, such a when they were traveling to a new place. Sometimes it needed a little more explaining of the situation; what's in an author's mind doesn't always convey to a reader perfectly. Though, this being said, I found myself enjoying the whimsical setting of this book. It is also a very original plot, mostly because it doesn't follow the "Oh no people don't believe in the Holidays we have to save them!" line. With the writing style, I found that it was pretty solid, just needing a few more descriptors. They can really bring out the scenes of your story! The writing style is not bad in the least - just needs a few more kinks to be worked out for it to be on the bestseller list. There are a few grammar errors - minor ones, if you will - that popped up here and there. While sentence structure was not a problem most of the time, some words were misspelled. Try reading your work out loud, to yourself or someone else, and you'll probably catch these little errors. Overall, I felt myself enjoying the story throughout, even though it may be made for a a younger age-group Write on!"
