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Very innovative!
"Enjoyed the story very much. Very unusual and innovative. Some grammar errors but otherwise very well written!"
#team Nekayah
"I don't know if being a witch is good or being half dead. But I won't mind knowing one. So it's a great book for real. I think Sofia's betrayal hurt the most. There I was voting for hot romance between Sofia and Nekayah. I think there's a moral to this story. Anyway, I enjoyed every part of it and the characters were relatable. Dear Author, you deserve some accolades. "
Amazing and innovative
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A Great Read!
"The story follows an disillusioned witch named Nekayah, as she tries to reach "Jarangosa". The one place she can rid herself of her unwanted powers. The first few chapters could well be a collection of shorts in "The adventures of..." and each of them were really good, the detail and description was wonderful, allowing me to change scenery with each story. it is not until later, that you realise they are important events in the making of Nekayah, and they each have a lesson for her. the problem with that was... it wasn't until chapter 5/6 that I actually found the plot. I did start to wonder if it was going anywhere. thank fully it did. The characters were great. "Not So, Swashbuckling as he'd like to be" Diego is going to be everyones favourite. but the descriptions of all characters, allows you clarity on who they are and give you a great opportunity to visualise them. I really enjoyed "The Old Soldier" His ethics as well as his bravery will be remembered here. The Magic was brilliant. At no point, did I feel like It was predictable and un-inventive. the authors descriptions regarding how it played out were very good. I believed in the amount of time it took Nekayah to draw her sigils and I loved that she could never quite get the "Travel" spell done in time. The Bad Bit... there are a lot of mistakes. I truly believe this is a draft. and perhaps English isn't the authors first language, (if it isn't, then this is a great job) so, I do not mind reading through them all, but there are a lot, missing words and wrong use of "tense" made me have to re-read sentences again. their are a lot of people who read, that would have given up quite early and the author would never get the feedback they are so desperate for. I know that, as an amateur author myself, you can't progress with out it. on the other hand. some of the words used by the Author are wonderfully creative and give the piece an edge in it's descriptive qualities. Over all I really enjoyed it, and I became quiet invested early on. MY personal desire, (delving into the "inquisition era" story,) Is that there ARE other witches out there. I would be very disappointed if Nekayah was the last of 'The Mother beyond the veil's' arcane students. I'd be interested to find out a lot more about this magic. Great Job. Good Read."
