What is your opinion?
Great Book
"This is my second time reviewing this book, and I have to say that it improved greatly! I have really enjoyed the book, and I would recommend it to everyone. The one part you could improve on is the punctuation. Again, as I said in my last review, please remember to put a punctuation point at the end of dialogues. Otherwise, this book is amazing and keep up the good work! -Ellie"
Exciting Beginning
"This is a fabulous beginning to your story. I found the first chapter a bit information heavy but by chapter two I was in its hold. It picked up pace as it weaved its way forward. If there was more to read I would have read on. There were a few errors that another read over will easily fix. I urge you onwards and upwards with this novel."
G.D.Grey
"This is a fine story, basically very well told and quite a page-turner. It mirrors some of the classical legends but in a new and imaginative way. I particularly like the way the humans are portrayed - perhaps a little too realistically for comfort, with their phlegmatic disinterest of their personal fates. It does need quite a considerable amount of editing though. Punctuation and overall matters of syntax need to be addressed.. Some spellings are also incorrect. For instance, you spell lightning wrongly. Lightening is what happens when use have enlightenment about a matter. Lightning is what happens in a thunderstorm. Also you mistake 'brooch' for 'broach' in Chapter 2. Brooch is a piece of jewellery; broach is when you put forward a subject for discussion, or force a hole in something. Also you have many paragraph gaps which are unnecessary in the dialogues. It's a fine imaginative work though and I wish you luck wit it. I also look forward to the next instalment."
GOLD
"I like the relationships that you put forth during this story during Titanomachy. It is very interesting."
Love it
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Love it
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