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The Breaking Of Saints Hollow

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Summary

Aria Cross never believed in omens. But when her grandmother dies whispering a verse that doesn't exist in any Bible and leaves behind a scorched iron cross, her life collapses into a storm of secrets she was never meant to uncover. Now trapped in Saints Hollow, a city too beautiful to be real, Aria learns that beneath its glass towers and soft lights lie ancient vows, forbidden bloodlines, and creatures that still remember Heaven's fall. ... In Saints Hollow, salvation has a price and Aria Cross might be the final payment.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Ellanive
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

PROLOGUE


The basement of St. Bartholomew's Church had not seen daylight in forty-seven years. Down here, beneath the worn stone foundations where generations had knelt in prayer, the air tasted of copper and decay. Candles flickered in iron sconces as their wax pooled like dried tears on the ancient stone floor.

"Forgive us our trespasses," Father Matthias intoned, his weathered hands trembling as he raised the vial of holy water above his head. The liquid caught the candlelight, refracting it into dancing shadows across the basement walls.

The boy strapped to the wooden chair was perhaps fourteen, though the hollow spaces beneath his eyes made him appear far older. His wrists were raw from the leather restraints, and his breathing came in shallow, desperate gasps.

"Forgive us our trespasses," the boy whispered, his voice barely audible. His head hung forward, dark hair matted with sweat.

"And lead us not into temptation," Father Matthias continued, reaching out to lift the boy's chin with fingers that had performed this ritual too many times before.

"And lead us not into-"

The sound that emerged from the boy's throat was not human. It was the wet crack of wood snapping, the grinding of bone against bone as his spine arched backward at an impossible angle. His mouth opened in a silent scream, vertebrae popping like firecrackers in the suffocating silence.

"Complete the prayer, boy," Father Matthias commanded, his voice cutting through the air with practiced authority. "You cannot break what has been consecrated."

"I'm... I'm trying," the boy sobbed, his spine snapping back into place with a sound like breaking branches. Blood began to seep from the corners of his eyes, trailing down his pale cheeks like crimson tears.

"And lead us not into temp-" Another guttural shriek tore from his throat, echoing off the stone walls until it seemed the very foundations of the church were screaming.

"He won't let me," the boy gasped, his head thrashing from side to side as if invisible hands were shaking him. "He won't let me finish it."

Father Matthias leaned closer, his breath visible in the suddenly frigid air. "Who, boy? Who commands you?"

The boy's jaw clenched until his gums split and bled, until his teeth ground against each other with the sound of grinding stone. The leather restraints groaned under the supernatural tension in his small frame.

"Speak!" Father Matthias grabbed the boy's shoulders, his fingers digging into flesh and bone. "Tell me who holds your tongue!"

"I can't... please make it stop..." The boy's voice was barely a whisper now, blood streaming from his eyes to pool at the hollow of his throat. "It burns... everything burns..."

"Don't you dare give in!" Father Matthias snarled, shaking the boy as foam began to bubble from his lips and his chest convulsed with each labored breath.

Then the boy's head snapped up.

The eyes that met Father Matthias were no longer the frightened brown of a child. They were the color of molten obsidian, reflecting flames that existed in no earthly fire. When he smiled, new teeth-sharp as razors and black as coal-pierced through his bleeding gums.

"Ex umbris…. nascetur puella…. sub luna fracta... servabit aut perdet, sed utrumque cruore ligatum est. Cum sanguis cadet super lapidem vetustum, mundus iterum respirabit in igne"

The words that poured from his mouth carried the weight of a thousand damned souls, each syllable resonating with harmonics that made the candle flames dance and the stone walls weep condensation. The boy's shoulders went slack, his head lolling forward like a broken marionette.

Silence.

Father Matthias stepped back, his hands shaking as he made the sign of the cross. Behind him, the assembled council-twelve men in black robes who had witnessed horrors beyond imagination-stood in various states of shock. Some stared with wide, haunted eyes. Others had vomited in the corners, overcome by the stench of sulfur that now filled the air. A few held their crucifixes high, their lips moving in desperate, silent prayer.

Brother Augustine, the youngest of them, broke the silence with a voice that quavered like autumn leaves. "Is it... is it finished, Father?"

Father Matthias wiped blood from his hands with a cloth that had seen too much use. His eyes never left the boy's still form.

"No," he said quietly, his voice carrying the weight of too many failures. "This one wasn't strong enough either."

He turned to face the council, and in the candlelight, his face looked carved from the same stone as the walls around them.

"Send word to the city. We need another child."

Outside, three stories above in the sanctuary where morning light filtered through stained glass windows, the church bells began to toll.

Ding dong.

The first mass of the day.

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