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The lighting hero

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Summary

on a dark and stormy night, a couple welcomes their new born son into the world, only to suffer heartbreak when the baby is declared stillborn. devastated, the father carries his son outside to bury him. before he can, a mysterious man made of pure lighting appears and pleads,'' please don't bury this one. i can save him.'' with nothing left to lose the father agrees. the stranger gently places a glowing, electrified finger on the baby's forehead, sendinng a surge of lighting through his tiny body. the child suddenly gasps and beings to cry. however, the miracle leaves permanent marks-his hair turns pure white,and his eyes become an icy blue. seeing his son alive once more, the father names him rejin. 18 years later, rejin has grown into a determind young man with extraordinary lighting based abilities. driven to become a superhero he enrolls into a superhero school and to uncover the mysterious being who saved him.

Genre
Action
Author
Kaiden
Status
3d ago
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1; the child of the storm

rain hammered on the rooftops the thunder roard across the night sky. lightning flashed so often that the world seemed to flicker between light and darkness.

inside a small house, chaos filled the room.

'' push!'' one of the midwives shouted.

a women cried out as she fought through another contraction. sweat covered her forehead while her husband knelt beside her, tightly holding her hand.

'' come on, honey,''he said, his voice shaking.'' your almost their.i can see the head.''

the midwives encouraged her with calm but urget voices.

'' one more push!''

with one final scream, the baby was born.

silence.

the room froze.

the husband looked from the baby to the midwives, his smile slowly disappearing.

''honey...?'' the mother whispered weakly.'' why don't i hear him crying?''

one of the midwives lowered their head.

the hsuband carefully took the tiny child into his arms. tears filled his eyes before he could even speak.

''i'm...i'm so sorry,'' he whispered.'' he didn't make it.''

a heartbreaking scream escaped the mother's lips as she covered her face and sobbed. the husband held the child close while tears rolled down his cheeks.

for the next hour, the small family mourned the son they will never know.

finally, the husband wiped his eyes.

'' i'm going to give him a proper burial.''

the mother nodded through her tears.

'' tell him... tell him i love him.''

'' i will.''

he stepped outside into the ragging storm, carrying a shovel in one hand and the lifeless baby wrapped in a blanket in the other.

rain soaked his clothes within seconds.

thunder exploded overhead.

lighting split the sky again and again.

he found a quite spot beneath a lonely tree and drove the shovel into the ground.

before he could dig another inch.

a bolt of lightening struck only a few feet away.

BOOM!!!

the bllinding flash forced him to shield his eyes.

when the light faded, someone was standing their.

a tall man dressed in white stood silently in the rain. tiny arcs of electricity danced arcoss his skin, and his glowing eyes seemed brighter then the storm itself.

''w-who are you?''

the stranger looked at the child.

'' please, '' he said softly.'' don't bury this one.''

the husband tighten his grip on the baby.

''...what?''

'' i can save him.''

the fathers expression twisted with anger and grief.

'' save him? he's dead!''

the mysterious man smiled sadly.

'' i have my ways.''

the father looked down at his son one last time.

their was nothing left to loose.

''...do it''

the stranger stepped forward and raised his finger. tiny sparks of lighting gathered at its tip before glowing brighter and brighter.

he gently touched the baby's forehead.

CRACK!!!

a surge of Brilliant electricity exploded through the childs body.

the father's eyes widened.

the baby's tiny body arched.

his dark hair slowly turned white.

then...

''WAAAH!!!''

the baby's cries echoed through the storm.

the father gasped.

his son... was alive.

the baby's eyes opened.

they weren't ordinary.

they glowed with an icy, electric blue unlike anything the father had ever seen.

tears streamed down his face as he held his child tightly.

'' thank you...''

but when he looked up...

the mysterious man was gone.

only the storm remained.

the father smiled through his tears and looked down into his son's glowing eyes.

your name is Rejin.

he gently held the baby's tiny hand.

' and one day... you'll become the greatest hero this world will ever known.''

high above the clouds the mysterious lightning man watched in silence.

beside him, another figure emerged from the darkness.

''so... you chose him.''

the lighting mans expression grew serious.

'' i had no choice.''

'' the shadown king has begun to awaken.''

lighting flashed arcoss the sky.

'' and only that child can stop whats coming.''

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This was a really strong opening, especially the scene where Rejin was brought back to life during the stor it was vivid and instantly hooked me. The mystry around the lightning man already has me wanting to know more. I'm curious, why did he choose Rejin specifically instead of anyone else? I'm excited to see how Rejin grows into the hero you've hinted at.

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