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EJDERİN GÖZÜ

Summary

A girl named Asena has the power of the five elemental powers, carrying the eye of a dragon. Ice, water, earth, wind and fire Thanks to these powers, he rules the dimensions, but this situation has targeted him and his enemies have increased. They go on a long journey with Batu and Alp, they have to fight with Baran and all they want is freedom.

Genre
Action
Author
Geceyalaz
Status
4mo ago
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Birth of Prophecy

Since the beginning of time, the five elements "fire, water, earth, wind and ice" These powers were united in one body, this person would carry the wisdom of the dragons, the healing of the phoenix and the war of dimensions, but for the first time this power was divided into three Alp Batu and Asena.

As the sky turned red, fear reigned within


While Queen Umay Ece was in labor pains, the footsteps echoing in the palace corridor were a sign of impending disaster for Baran's men had already crossed the border and it was clear what he was looking for: "THE EYE OF THE DRAGON" Queen Umay Ece was sweating, clutching the cradle cover tightly, her newly born daughter, Asena, inside, a phoenix sign on her back and a dragon sign flashing on her arm."The time has come," said the queen "Take him to the forest, Baran must not find him" But it was too late. The sky outside the palace turned black. Clouds corrupted by black magic moaned with dragon cries. The black dragon had awakened.


THE BEGINNING OF EVERYTHING

Scientists experimenting on people underground.

Inside the lab were burnt cables, strange capsules, people screaming in pain, and a smell of burnt flesh. In the middle of the lab was a huge machine.A tall man with long black hair and dark circles under his eyes walked in and

-He started kicking the machine and shouting, "It's not working."

Hearing this voice, a man with slightly messy hair, dark skin and green eyes came running.

-Baran, stop now, the machine is about to fall apart, we gave it our lives.

Baran responded immediately

-Yavuz is not working, the dimensioning machine is not working

Yavuz approached Baran and put his hand on his shoulder and spoke in a calm voice.

-Calm down, maybe we're doing something wrong, stop, we're not dead yet and we have time.

Baran got angry, failure was a nightmare for him and not being able to do it was driving him crazy and he whispered some words.

-Succeed, succeed so that you become strong and redeem yourself, then destroy the weak.

Baran whispered these. Yavuz looked at him, worried and afraid but didn't show it. He touched Baran's shoulder.

- Come on, let's take a breath outside, it'll be good for you.

He said and took her out

Yavuz and Baran used to be very good friends. They were together when they were kids. They were both good at school, so they became scientists. But Baran changed a lot during this time. He wanted to make a machine and he He was going to travel between dimensions thanks to the machine, but it didn't work. Baran had no goodness left in him. He only wanted to destroy the weak and rule the world. Yavuz was trying to stop him. He was working, but deep down he agreed with him.

They were both sitting outside, they were on top of the building. And they were laughing

Baran- Yes, I remember that. You were beaten up a lot and I came and saved you.

Yavuz-It was the opposite, only you went and stood up to them, and besides, they were bigger than us and outnumbered us, so we all got beaten up.

They were both happy, it was as if time had stopped and there were only old memories.


Suddenly the sky turned red and an object hit the earth. Baran saw this and stood up. He spoke with excitement

Baran- The meteor fell, come on Yavuz, get up and say it.

Yavuz slowly stood up and looked into the distance.

Yavuz - Actually, it would be good, it fell nearby anyway.

And they both set out on this path, a path that would determine their fate. When they got there, there was a huge hole Baran jumped out of the car, slid down into the pit and shouted

Baran- Yavuz! Come here, there is a black stone here! He said

Yavuz came with his hands in his pockets and was calm, then he looked at the stone and spoke.

Yavuz- It emits a strange energy.He said don't touch it with your bare hands

Baran looked at Yavuz, then nodded, immediately knelt down on the ground and took out a handkerchief from his pocket.And slowly took the stone

Baran said, "Even if I touch it with a handkerchief, I feel its power."

Yavuz looked at the stone and then spoke slowly and calmly.

Yavuz-Let's go, the press will come soon, they don't want to see us he said.

Baran put the stone in his pocket and they walked towards the car.They started the car and left.


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