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The pretty devils of Konoha's Gale

Summary

Authors note: -The cover of the story is what I like to think is the Hirius clan symbol. - I didn't realize I made them have Kushina's color palette so my bad 😭 -Konohas gale is their mothers title in the village. That's how I thought of the title of this story OKAY, that's all and I hope you enjoy reading!!

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Aryen
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
13
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Character Backgrounds


The Hirius clan was a powerful and quite unique clan, unlike the othes. Many clans had dojutsus and sealing techniques passed down by members. But what made the Hirius clan different is that they could fly, they weren't Gods, Otsotsukis or anything, it was a jutsu passed down only to the Hirius clan members, the members were almost extinct and every Hirius had brown hair and brown eyes. Except 4 Hirius members who are still alive and well living peacefully in konoha.

The first was Kagami Hirius, has brown hair and blue eyes, inherited from her parents. She was a prodigy, learning their sacred technique in only a year while adults still have trouble using it. She met a man whom she had 3 kids with, even so, he abandoned them and he had red hair and green eyes.

The oldest son is 16 years old and his name is Shijimi Hirius and like his mother, he is a skilled prodigy since birth, and surpassing her by learning the technique since he was 4 and mastered it at 8. 4 year difference, yes. But at a young age, barely anyone could even try it which made Shijimi so exceptional, he inherited his red hair from his father which he resented if it weren't for his mother. Even so he still resents his father to this day for abandoning them. Still he didn't let that get to him and was glad he looked like his mother, earning him a title in their household called the "pretty boy". And with his exceptional skills, he is currently a jonin and was promoted at 14 years old. His mentors are his mother and Hanare Hatake.

The second child is Hanji Hirius, 14 year old and is a chunin. He has more of a masculine structure than his siblings, he to, has red hair and blue eyes. Like his older brother, Hanji is a prodigy and can already fly with ease with excellent chakra control. His mentors are his mother and Shijimi, his older brother, whom he looks up too. Unlike Shijimi, who's mature and serious for his age. Hanji is an ambivert, he's quite playful and occasionally flirty cause he knows he and his brothers have very striking appearance. In their household, he jokes he is the most handsome out of the 3 of them thanks to his more masculine-like structure.

The youngest child is Deravi Hirius, only 13 and is still a genin but he is far from genin-level. Like his older brothers, he also has red hair and blue eyes, also mastering the flying technique as a child. Deravi learned early on how they could do it using wind style. Which made sense to him why he, his brothers and mom are wind style users. The difference is that he and his mom only have 1 chakra nature while his older brothers have 2 (Shijimi wind/lightning, Hanji Wind/Fire). Deravi knows hes handsome, and is quite an extrovert he's funny, playful and flirty. Between the 3 brothers. He was the first to realize girls acted differently around them cause of their looks. In their household he calls himself the cutest one, while his brothers call him a cute devil.

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