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Sea Foam

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Summary

She cast one more lingering, half-fainting glance at him, and then threw herself into the water, and thought her body was dissolving into foam. When people hear the name "Arielle Blue," they automatically think: the Swimmer. Arielle is easily the best swimmer in her school, and everyone knows it. Everyone thinks she wants to follow her family's footsteps and train to become a national swimmer, but she has more joy in singing and dancing. Although she plans to keep this a secret until the end, this changes after the new kid finds out and somehow convinces her to audition for the school musical.

Status
9yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Foreword

1. This retelling will be based off the original version of “The Little Mermaid”and Disney’s version and parts I'll make up. So, you will see stuff that happened in only one version, or in neither, because I wanted to change it.

2. While I say this is a retelling, this will be V E R Y different from the two above. The reason being that I find a lot of plot holes and dumb ideas in the movie/story (really sorry, please keep hate to yourself, please), so you’ll find a bare skeleton of the actual plot. Like, different to the point I’m wondering if I can claim I came up with the plot. (Hint, hint!) Also, this will take place in a high school in a modern AU. That being said, although this may have a clichéd plot and beginning, well, let’s just say I already have the plot tw-- the ending in mind.

3. I had thought the mermaid turned into sea foam at the end, hence the title of this retelling, but it turns out she actually goes to heaven to become immortal or some other bullcrap (sorry again -- this is an example of what I meant). However, I’m going to keep the title, since I came up with the title name first.

4. Updates every Monday!

The above four tidbits are pretty much it -- I wanted to get numbers one and two straight, especially. Anyways, I hope you like this “retelling,” whether you like “The Little Mermaid” or not.

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