What is your opinion?
I love your book!
"This book is the most interesting thing i've ever read on inkitt, it had drama, adventure etc. I love how the plot goes and want to encourage you to keep on writing. abaut the end came a little surprising and i never would have expected it. And above all, your work is original and unpredictable. Nice Job!"
Elements
"Love it its very good want to read more"
I love your book!!!
"Awesome book!!!!"
Elementals
"The plot is well written and the characters are unique and interesting. Giving them distinct physical features and powers helps expand their own stories and personalities"
Tray T
"Book Was Great. Waiting For the Second Installment. "
It's exciting plot
"It's a very amazing plot.I expect part 2 of this.well you should have told the principal mr.Mcarts is Rosalie father.I figured it out by the procepercy that told the he will guide the good and how does dan knows about his family when he lost at age of four."
Elementals
"I need more!! I loved it!!"
Elementals
"It is really interesting."
Interesting
"Interesting"
Elementals
"Continue it"
The elementals
"I really enjoy how the author builds up the characters. The book is also very intriguing. "
Elementals
"A fun and exciting fantasy story. Rosalie might be my new favorite person:) She's a strong and hysterical character. You write great action scenes (thought some of the dialogue in the action scenes feels a little forced) and the story had a fast pace that kept me glued to the page. Your cliffhanger at the end made me want more."
Short and sweet
"The story starts of as a kind of a fairy tale. However, the very beginning is soon directed right to the point and it becomes clear that it is going to get far more serious. You have a nice style of writing, with enjoyable descriptions and great characters portrayal. The fact that a brother and a sister are fighting each other, and both for their own causes they believe in, makes this story even more exciting and thrilling. And you have a great way of engaging the reader. I felt like I was part of the story while reading it. I felt sorry for May in the end, but I liked how you ended your story in a kind of a cliffhanger. I wonder if you will write more of it. I’d certainly love to read it if you do."
Good potential
"This book has good potential bit at the moment is slightly patchy with information however is still very interesting. I'm excited to see what happens"
Great!
"You have a great idea but there are a number of minor mistakes in the text such as spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Furthermore the first and second chapters could be combined. However you did great with the plot and I really like the theme with the Elementals. You're really onto something and I can't wait to read more."
The elementals
"This is an amazing story. Full of quick leans and plot twists. I love the author. I hope in the future she makes more stories like this. Or she could even make this as series."
Review
"The plot is interesting, and the world building is pretty okay; but in some places dialogue and discription could be better. "
