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The adventure of jack on an island part 14

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Summary

Time changes people’s entire behavior and thinking

Status
7mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 14 the great vessel of Hope

Many months had passed since Jack had used the obsidian blade to cut his long, wild hair. His hair was still short and neat, though the sun had turned the ends a lighter gold. The jagged scar across his left eye had faded from a bright red to a silvery white, making him look like a seasoned captain of the woods.

Jack had spent these months thinking. He loved his cave. He loved the forest. But every time he looked at the blue horizon, he thought of his mother and father. He knew he could not stay a ghost forever. It was time to go home.

Jack knew he could not leave the island on a small pile of sticks. The ocean was a monster that had already swallowed a billionaire’s yacht. If he wanted to survive the deep blue water, he needed a vessel that was natural but stable for a long time.

He didn't want to build a "modern" boat with metal or nails. He wanted to build something that belonged to the island. He spent weeks walking the coastline, picking the perfect materials.

First, Jack needed the "bones" of his raft. He went to the part of the forest where the Giant Bamboo grew. These poles were as thick as Jack’s leg and as hard as iron. Most importantly, bamboo is hollow and full of air, which means it can never sink.

He cut down twenty of the largest bamboo poles. He dragged them one by one to a quiet sandy cove where the waves were small.

Next, he needed the "skin" to keep the raft stable. He went to the mountain and cut down several Redwood logs. These were heavy, but they would act as a keel to keep the raft from tipping over in a storm.

In his old life, Jack would have used steel bolts. Here, he used the earth. He gathered hundreds of feet of Iron-Vine. These vines were as strong as rope but flexible when wet.

Jack soaked the vines in the salt water for two days to make them tough. Then, he began the long work of tying the bamboo poles together. He didn't just tie them once; he wrapped the vines in a "criss-cross" pattern over and over again. He placed the heavy redwood logs underneath the bamboo to give the raft weight and balance.

To make the raft "stable for a long time," Jack used Tree Resin. He heated the sticky sap from the cedar trees over his fire until it was a liquid. He poured the hot resin into every gap and every knot. When it cooled, it became as hard as plastic, sealing the raft against the salt water.

Jack didn't just want a floor; he wanted a home for the sea.

The Mast: He chose a young, straight cedar tree for the mast. He buried it deep into the center of the bamboo deck and braced it with four heavy stones.

The Sail: He didn't have cloth, so he wove a giant mat out of dried palm fibers. It was thick and heavy, strong enough to catch the wind without ripping.

The Storage: He built a small wooden crate on the deck to hold his gourds of fresh water and his smoked fish.

The work took two full months. Jack was tired, but when he looked at the finished raft, he felt a surge of pride. It was ten feet long and six feet wide. It was solid. It was beautiful.

On a bright Monday morning, the wind began to blow away from the island toward the north. Jack knew this was the sign.

He went to the Black Cave one last time. He touched the stone walls. He went to the tiger’s grave and placed a final flower on the rocks.

"Thank you for saving me," Jack whispered to the island.

He pushed the heavy raft into the water. It floated perfectly, sitting high and proud on the waves. Jack jumped onto the bamboo deck and grabbed the long wooden oar he had carved for steering.

He untied the vine that held the sail. The palm-fiber cloth caught the wind and puffed out. The raft began to move. Jack sat down at the back, his hand on the rudder, and watched as the beach began to get smaller and smaller.

The journey across the great ocean had begun.

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