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- Is déjà vu just an allegory of irrational course? Upcycling past events, into wasted time, to torment an infertile creativity. What is real horror? Perhaps an incident that breaks you, getting worse by repetition as a morbid addiction. It might happen before… the doubt forces you to act in order to avoid it, with futile outcomes. With each lap the circle grows forming a dark maelstrom, inside it; the experience is an absurd existentialism, a nightmare of infinite horror.
The story is written as a monologue describing the character’s schism after suicide, becoming a wight and dwelling forever in repetition… every three stanzas the event goes further, not time, increasing doubts and horror towards a tasteless re-start.
On the penultimate stanza, the character wants or needs logic for a piece of mind.
If you wish, you could read it also from bottom to top.
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