What is your opinion?
More Raven Needed
"This story was brilliant. It opened on such a calm scene and you were left wondering why she was on an island, thinking it was a shipwreck. Then, as the story unfolded, you slowly replace that questions with others. Who stuck her on the island? Why? What are her superpowers? Where did they come from? This story is equal parts mystery and imaginative that makes the reader want to continue long after the chapter ends. Your descriptions are riveting. I don't think the torture chamber scene could have been better described, even by Shakespeare himself. Aside from watching your commas, you have quite a few missing, there is nothing here I can critique. You did wonderful."
Ravenous for more Raven
"I like the introduction into what seems to be a typical day for Raven. There is mystery and intrigue. I want to know more about this strange character and how she came about her supernatural powers and I want to know why she is living in such a remote area; what transpired before her move? I have so many unanswered questions, but I love the guessing! I am eagerly awaiting a continuation of this mysterious story👍👍"
Thrilling
"This story is very thrilling so far. It is mysterious and confusing at times. But, even though it can get a bit confusing, there is something in it that makes you read on, something that is so absorbing, which is why you cannot stop reading until you have come to the end. You are on a good track right here with this story. And Raven is so mysterious and such a complex character. I am very curious about her. I would love to read the rest of this story and find out what happens with her. Overall, I have really enjoyed this so far."
