What is your opinion?
Interesting!!
"This looks like an exciting read!! Can't wait for what unfolds next! Keep it up🩷"
Drama, heart break, and sweet happy ending
"This story has a drama and boy it’s a lot. The characters each have their own love interest despite them being enemies. It a sweet short story with the villain of the story ( an elder sister) to one of the main character who gets what’s coming to her. Critique part which honestly I’m not great at so here are recommendations: take the emoji out. Honestly you have a good plot. Every reader is a sucker for ememies to lovers ( I know I am 🔥❤️) Trust your story that it will tell it. Instead of saying scene change, I would take time flush out the transition. Don’t rush the story take your time to describe the school, and show us the characters personality. You did great with the dialogue and I can picture ! Overall I feel like this story has great potential for intense drama genre! "
