The Fine Line ( Rivalry Across The Hall) by Priya at Inkitt
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THE FINE LINE ( Rivalry across the hall)

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Summary

"The fine line" follows the intense and bitter rivalry between kavin, the cold and disciplined student council president, and Techin, a rebellious free-spirited junior from the music club. Their enmity begins in the school hallways, but it hides deeper more vulnerable truths.

Genre
Drama
Author
Priya
Status
Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
3.5 2 reviews
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 Rain, Fight and Fate

The story begins in the main school 🏫 corridor, where Techin is putting up a music club poster on the wall 🧱.

Suddenly, kavin arrives and tears the poster down. He tells him that before putting this poster here, he must get permission from him.

Techin speaks angrily 😡, " It's my choice where I put the poster. Why is it a problem for you ?"

Just then , Mek says, " Hey 👋 man, stop fighting. You tore this poster, so now give us the money 💰 to make a new one ."

Kavin replies, Money 💰? I won't give you any money. If you had asked for permission to put the poster here instead of asking for money, maybe I would have given it.

Techin responds, " I don't want money 💰; you will bring me a new poster. If you don't ..." Hearing this , kavin angrily 😡 grabs Techin by the collar, and Techin grabs his collar back.

They start fighting. Their best friends 🙋 try to pull them apart, but they show no 🙂‍↔️ signs of stopping the fight.

Just then , a teacher arrives, and only then do they let go of each other . The teacher calls both of them to the office.

The teacher asks Techin," Did you put up the poster I asked you to ?" Techin replies, " I did, but I guess someone didn't like it . That's why they tore it up," Techin says all this while staring directly at Kavin.

Hearing this makes Kavin furious, but he remains silent in front of the teacher. Then, the teacher says," why do you two keep fighting with each other ? Come on, apologise for the fight."

Neither of them wanted to say sorry, but they give each other a half - hearted apology just for the teacher's sake. Techin tells the teacher, " I'll put up another poster." After saying that , Techin leaves the office, glaring at Kavin.

After lunch time , Techin and his friend Mek go to the canteen to eat. When Techin open his lunch box, he sees a lizard 🦎 inside and throws the box away in disgust.

It doesn't take him long to figure out who did this. He goes straight to Kavin, grabs his lunch box , and dumps all the food over him. Seeing this , Kavin loses his temper and moves to hit Techin, but his friend Fah holds him back. Kavin leaves in a rage, and Fah follows after him.

Kavin was sitting in the school garden. Fah approached him and said, " That junior is so mischievous. He doesn't even know how to respect his seniors. By the way , what did you do this time?"

[ FLASHBACK]

While Techin was outside putting up poster with his friends, Kavin had secretly slipped a fake Lizard 🦎 into his lunch box .

[ PRESENT]

Fah exclaimed, " what? You put a fake Lizard 🦎in there? If i were in your place, I would have put a real one in his lunch box !

Anyway, the music competition is in one month.have you found a partner yet ? Who are you going to perform with?" Kavin replied, " Not yet". After saying that , they both headed to the library.

After school ended, Techin went to a coffee shop for his part-time job. Along with his studies , Techin also works part-time. The coffee shop owner told him to quickly change into his uniform and start serving coffee to the customers.

Techin changed fast and began serving. Once he finished his work and took his payment from the owner, his sister called 🤙 him. He picked up the call , and his sister said, " come home quickly, I need to talk to you about something important ".

Techin started running home, but suddenly it began to rain heavily. Since he had forgotten his umbrella ☔ at the coffee shop , he had to go home 🏠 soaking wet .

Upon reaching home , he saw his Sister,( Lily) sitting on the sofa holding a stick. Techin went to her and gave her the money 💰 and told him to quickly finish all the housework, adding, " make sure you bring me the money on time. I don't like wating."

Techin quickly changed his clothes and started cleaning the house. Suddenly, a flower pot accidentally slipped from his hand and broke.

Seeing this , Lily began to beat Techin. Afterwards, Techin went to his room and fell asleep while crying.

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author

sorry 😔 but next time I will take care from now on

2 months
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author

The emojis are a bit of a distraction, but not a bad story overall. 😔

2 months
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starting is best🥰 but emoji is distracting me.

2 months

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