What is your opinion?
great start!
"Love your writing style and I love the dynamic of your characters! Keep it up! I see this becoming really great!"
The Light within the Darkness
"Our captivating story. Great for reading."
Great Beginning
"This is a great beginning and I look forward to seeing where it goes and what is really happening behind the scenes. I like your main character she is strong and well rounded. Keep at it this could be a wonderful story. That if she over comes the bullying and can rise beyond it can help many people. CETurner"
Nice Start
"I enjoyed reading especially the first chapter with the writing. I also loved the writing style and the general story idea. However, I thought the thing with the cyber bullying was spring on me too fast, as if the author had just had the idea that it'd be a nice input in the story. The way you could improve in that, I'd say, is to write in sole thoughts from the MC's pespective, which hint at fear or wondering who does that kind of stuff and why. Or if it's the first time she has the problem, show us her surprise. Other than that, it was quite good, well done!"
