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Black Hollow

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Summary

Ethan and his pregnant wife, Amara, cross into rural Kentucky for one final cabin vacation before the birth of their daughter. What begins as a warm, intimate road trip through isolated backroads slowly turns unsettling after a strange stop at a small gas station where locals seem disturbed by the couple’s destination: Black Hollow Cabins. Ignoring subtle warnings about the roads after sundown, Ethan and Amara continue deeper into the endless forest while an eerie old country song crackles through the radio with cryptic lyrics that feel almost directed at them. As the roads grow darker, the GPS fails, and the woods close in around them, Ethan begins to realize something is deeply wrong with Black Hollow. Then he looks into the rearview mirror— and sees a silent little boy sitting in the back seat. Now trapped on a road that doesn’t seem to follow normal rules, Ethan and Amara must uncover the terrifying truth behind Black Hollow before the forest—and whatever lives inside it—claims them both.

Genre
Thriller
Author
MakaylaB
Status
Complete
Chapters
20
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1 — The Long Road South


Ethan watched the last of the sunset peel itself away from the treetops, a slow-burning smear of coral and violet tangling itself across the rearview mirror. Out here the sky felt impossibly wide, the land open and empty, the distant line of pines pinning the horizon into place like a stitched wound.

The GPS mounted near the dashboard chimed softly.

5:00 PM — WELCOME TO KENTUCKYBLACK HOLLOW CABINS — 5 MINUTES AWAY

Beside him, Amara bent over the glove compartment, rooting through receipts and ancient ChapSticks while humming badly off-key beneath her breath. Her twists brushed against her cheeks as she searched, the fading sunlight catching warm copper tones through the dark coils. Even five months pregnant, curled sideways in the passenger seat of Ethan’s black SUV, she somehow still carried herself with an effortless softness that made Ethan stare longer than he probably should’ve.

“Oh my God, finally,” she groaned dramatically, stretching until her oversized hoodie lifted slightly over the curve of her stomach. “If I spend another hour in this car, this baby’s coming out shaped like a seatbelt.”

Ethan snorted quietly.

“She already got your attitude. We’re doomed.”

“Excuse you,” Amara said, turning toward him with mock offense. “I’m delightful.”

“Violently.”

She smacked his arm while laughing.

“Found it,” she announced a second later, emerging victorious with a battered tube of lip balm. “This expired like… two Christmases ago. I think it’s more plastic than wax now.”

Ethan grinned, blue eyes flicking toward her from behind his glasses. One hand stayed loose on the wheel while the other reached across the console to squeeze her thigh gently through the soft cotton of her leggings.

“I’ll try anything once,” he said. “Except your cooking.”

Amara’s laughter filled the cab warm and easy, the kind of laugh that loosened something tight inside Ethan’s chest every time he heard it.

The Kentucky border road stretched ahead like a sugared ribbon now, the last breath of sunlight dusting the battered pines in copper and pink. Ethan drove lazily with one arm hooked over the steering wheel, his heavier frame slouched comfortably into the seat after nine straight hours on the road. Beside him, Amara had reclined her seat dangerously far back, chipped red polish catching flashes of dying sunlight as she propped her feet against the dashboard.

They sang along badly to an old Willie Nelson song—Amara loud and theatrical while Ethan mostly mumbled through the verses until the chorus, where he intentionally harmonized louder just to annoy her.

“Why do all your playlists sound like divorce and whiskey?” she teased, thumping the glove compartment lightly with her heel.

Ethan kept a straight face for almost two full seconds.

“Because life is pain, darling. I’m preparing you for parenthood.”

He rubbed her stomach gently through the hoodie.

The baby shifted faintly beneath his palm.

That tiny movement still startled him sometimes.

Not fear.

Just awe.

Amara softened immediately, covering his hand briefly before leaning over to kiss his knuckles.

For a while the drive stayed easy.

Comfortable.

The kind of peace people never realize they’re inside until it’s already gone.

The gas station rose up off the next exit like a neon mirage, its flickering OPEN 24 HRS sign buzzing weakly above a row of battered vacuum hoses. Ethan pulled into pump three with a relieved sigh.

Nine hours on the road had settled into his bones.

Amara was already unbuckling beside him.

“Should we go in together,” she asked, stretching her arms high above her head, “or do you want to live dangerously and trust me with the snack selection?”

Ethan looked horrified.

“You’d come back with raisins and baby carrots.”

“I’m carrying your child.”

“Exactly why I need to intervene.”

She laughed and punched his thigh gently before both of them stepped out into the thick Kentucky air.

The evening heat wrapped around them immediately—humid, heavy, unfamiliar.

Behind them, the last edge of sunlight disappeared fully behind the trees.

The bell above the gas station door gave a wet, toneless clunk as they stepped inside, a sound so off-kilter Ethan wondered if maybe it was broken or simply tired of its job. The interior held the familiar low hum of ancient refrigeration units and microwave burritos left out too long. The air smelled like old soda syrup, burnt coffee, tobacco, and mop water that had given up years ago.

It was, in its own way, a perfect little time capsule.

A two-aisle kingdom of beef jerky, scratch-offs, and stale chips bathed beneath fluorescent lights that made everything look vaguely sick.

Amara drifted immediately toward the coffee station while Ethan wandered toward the coolers.

The conversations stopped almost instantly.

Two men in camo hats stood near the register holding six-packs. One of them—his face flushed red beneath a Saints cap—watched Ethan and Amara with open wariness, eyes drifting repeatedly toward the SUV parked outside.

The other man slowly lowered his beer.

Nobody smiled.

Amara either didn’t notice or pretended not to.

“Do I want sour cream chips or barbecue?” she asked casually, holding up both bags.

“Barbecue,” Ethan answered automatically.

“Wrong.”

“Then why ask me?”

“Because marriage is about participation.”

The man in the Saints cap still hadn’t looked away.

Not angry.

Not hostile.

Worried.

That bothered Ethan more.

The countertop beside the register looked almost like an altar—smudged scratch-offs, rusted Zippos, cloudy jars of pickled eggs floating in yellow brine, and crooked postcard racks showing forests swallowed by fog.

Then Ethan noticed the sign taped beside the register.

The paper had yellowed with age.

The black Sharpie lettering looked shaky.

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Looking forward to read the rest soon. Seems very intriguing 😊

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