What is your opinion?
Challanging!
"I was there seeing the world through her eyes. And what a challenge it was to then assess my own life after reading such a depiction. I was fully engolfed in the story the only set back was the end somehow I felt as cheated as the Character must have felt throughout the story having come in to the end of it and dying to read more. It left me to question what her life must be like now or moreso how much my life may parallel this woman's. So often we live life safely without challenges or real risks that it does make one wonder if we're truly living out our lives. And after reading an experience like this to have the desire to live as though we would not live past this day."
A Candid Look At Life
"Awesome eerie story that kept me continuously drawn into it to know how it ends! Writing style of the author describes the scenes so candidly its as if your in the story experiencing whats going on! Looking forward to reading more stories from this author!"
Interesting
"Definitely not what I expected. But very enjoyable. It was a unique perspective on what it is to live...and die. I think that you need to make the very beginning more vivid so that it will really pack a punch. I was confused at first. Also, there were a lot of typos that needed corrected. Other than that, I thought it was a great story. Good luck in the contest!"
Life is precious
"Really liked this story. Some really good descriptive work, and in my opinion just the right amount of conversation. It did remind me ever so slightly of the movie "Final Destination", which isn't a criticism, its just what I personally get reminded of. I really enjoyed it though. Well done."
Conform to Nonconformity...
"seems to be the moral of this story. I get that the spirit was trying to get her to see that she should've lived her life to the fullest and taken more chances, but doesn't that mean she's not doing it by her own choice at all? That would mean he made her, right? Otherwise, he'll just kill again, as he stated. Maybe living a simple life of safety and books was living her life to the fullest, because that's what made her happiest. What she defined as truly living is what's most important right? I think this story would be a lot better if you added one more chapter about the rest of her life, her interaction with the spirit and the choices she makes because of the incident. The spirit might not be a spirit at all, but rather demon that wanted to make a deal with her or something. It would also be cool, just to see how her life changes and what she does with her second chance."
