Wrong Shoes
POV: Joanna
The gravel crunched under my heels — a sound that felt almost accusatory, like the land itself was pointing out I didn’t belong here.
When I’d finally managed to arrange the meeting with Cole Whitfield, at his property, I hadn’t expected it to be in the middle of an actual working farm. I’d pictured something imposing — almost a castle, the kind of property with a paved entrance where you could leave your car and walk to the front door on asphalt. Something that matched the net worth I’d read about.
That was why I was now wearing completely inappropriate shoes for where I was standing.
I had been to farms before. I’d grown up forty minutes from one, had spent enough summers helping my uncle with his horses to know the smell of hay and manure didn’t bother me. But this was not a farm in the sense my uncle’s fifteen acres had been a farm.
Whitfield Ranch spread across the valley like it owned the horizon. Which, I supposed, it did.
Three thousand acres of Montana grassland, two stable complexes, a breeding operation that turned away clients, and a main house that somehow managed to look like it had grown out of the earth rather than been built on it. Édouard had shown me the property file on the plane. I’d read every page. I thought I’d been prepared.
I had not been prepared for Cole Whitfield standing at the fence line — not at the house, not at some formal meeting point — just there, watching his men work a young stallion in the near paddock, one boot on the lowest rail, arms crossed over the fence post.
He didn’t come to us.
He waited for us to come to him.
Already, I thought.
Édouard was delighted. Of course he was. He’d invested in my company and now held twenty percent of everything LiveStock IQ was worth. If I could convince Whitfield how much the software could do for an operation this size, I’d have the leverage to buy those shares back. And Édouard would be satisfied. Until then, he’d wanted to accompany me to this client — the largest I’d ever approached.
Cole stepped away from the fence and shook the older man’s hand. A single firm movement. No performance in it.
“Mr. Whitfield, we are so glad to be here.” Édouard switched to French without missing a beat, the way he always did once formalities were out of the way. ”Vous avez une propriété remarquable. Nous espérons pouvoir vous aider à la développer encore davantage."
I translated. “He says you have a remarkable property. He hopes to help you develop it further.”
Cole looked at Édouard. “We’ll see about that. Let’s sit on the terrace and talk more.”
"Il dit qu’on verra. Il nous invite à nous installer sur la terrasse." I kept my voice neutral.
His voice was lower than I’d expected. Unhurried. I hadn’t expected that either — any of it. I’d pictured someone short and stocky, the classic red-faced farmer who spent too much time outdoors, with a loud laugh and a stomach that arrived before he did. Cole didn’t appear in newspapers, despite being one of the wealthiest landowners in the region. Everything I’d managed to find about him was that he’d been married to a doctor and had a daughter. The only photograph I’d located showed a boy barely grown into a man, a tattoo visible on one arm — the kind of image I’d have filed under rich kid with inherited money. The farm had been his father’s. Cole had taken it somewhere else entirely.
The man walking ahead of me was tall. A tattoo climbed the side of his neck above the collar of a white shirt that did nothing to hide what was underneath. Dark hair. Blue eyes. Tanned without trying.
Édouard made no move to introduce me. I decided it wasn’t necessary. Cole hadn’t looked at me anyway.
The terrace turned out to be something genuinely worth the word — a wide shaded space along the side of the house, positioned to catch the best view of the main paddocks and the valley beyond. The kind of place that made you understand why someone would never want to leave.
When we sat, a woman appeared and asked what we’d like to drink. Cole ordered water. I said the same. It was the first time I’d spoken since translating, and the first time he looked at me.
Not the quick sweep men usually gave me — starting at my face, pausing somewhere they shouldn’t, then pretending to be professional. This was an assessment. Calm, complete, slightly inconvenient for whoever was being looked at. Then his eyes moved back to Édouard.
"Avant de parler affaires," Édouard said, settling into his chair, ”j’aimerais en savoir plus sur votre domaine. Ce que j’ai vu jusqu’ici m’a coupé le souffle."
“Before business,” I said, “he’d like to hear more about the farm. What he’s seen so far has taken his breath away.”
Cole talked. Three thousand acres of pasture, a dairy operation supplying two regional distributors, a horse breeding program producing twelve to fifteen foals per season — sold, none kept except working stock. And then the newest addition: a small hotel attached to the property, opened eight months ago, where guests came for clean food, trail rides, and the chance to participate in actual farm work. Full every weekend through October.
I translated each part cleanly, keeping my pace steady. I was good at this. I’d spent enough time in rooms where my job was to be useful without being noticed.
Then Édouard leaned forward. ”Et vous avez construit tout cela sans investisseurs extérieurs? Sans consultants?"
“He’s asking whether you built all of this without outside investors or consultants.”
“I’ve had offers.” Cole leaned back in his chair, unhurried in the way of someone who had nowhere more important to be and knew it. “I’ve learned that the most efficient way to run what I run is to stay present. In the field. In the stable. Not in a meeting room looking at someone else’s charts.”
"Il dit qu’il a reçu des offres. Mais qu’il a appris que la meilleure façon de gérer ce qu’il a, c’est d’être présent — sur le terrain, dans l’écurie. Pas dans une salle de réunion à regarder les graphiques de quelqu’un d’autre."
Édouard smiled at that. Then Édouard asked his next question — ”Et concernant votre production laitière — quel est le ratio de fourrage de report utilisé pour les veaux par rapport à ce qui part en commercialisation?"
I started. “He’s asking about your milk yield — the ratio of—” I paused. Fourrage de report. I knew fourrage. The rest of it snagged somewhere between my tongue and my brain.
"Carry-over forage," Cole said. Flat. Still looking at Édouard. “He’s asking about the carry-over forage ratio versus commercial yield.”
Édouard turned to Cole with something approaching delight. ”Vous parlez français?"
"J’ai passé quelque temps en France." Cole’s French was easy. Unhurried, the same as everything else about him. ”J’ai acheté des chevaux en Normandie pendant quelques années."
They continued in French, the two of them, and I sat between them with my water glass and my notepad and the particular stillness of someone who has just been made irrelevant in a room they were supposed to be running.
I was already building the argument I’d use to change his mind.
They were deep into it by then, the two of them, moving through questions about land management and seasonal yield in easy French when Cole asked: ”Et concrètement, qu’est-ce que vous attendez de cette collaboration?"
Édouard glanced at me.
I didn’t wait for him to find the words.
“LiveStock IQ monitors your herd in real time,” I said, in English. “Every animal carries a small sensor. The system tracks health indicators, water consumption, fertility windows, individual milk yield, feed conversion. It flags problems before they become vet bills. It tells you which cow is about to get sick three days before she does.”
Cole turned to look at me. Not the assessment from before — something more direct. Like he was deciding whether I was worth the redirect.
“Two months,” I continued. “Free. You run it alongside what you already do, you don’t change a single thing about how you operate. At the end of two months, if it hasn’t shown you something useful, you walk away. No contract, no obligation.”
“And if it does?”
“Then we talk.”
He held my gaze for a moment, then looked back at Édouard. Almost as an afterthought: ”Laissez-moi voir vos projections."
“They’re not projections,” I said. He looked at me again. “They’re results. From seventeen farms currently running the system.” I pulled the folder from my bag and set it on the table in front of him. “Not what we think it could do. What it does.”
A beat of silence.
He picked up the folder and opened it.
For a few minutes nobody spoke. Édouard looked out over the valley. I watched Cole’s eyes move across the pages — steady, unhurried, the same as everything else about him. He didn’t react to anything he read. When he was done he set it down on the table. Not closed. Just down.
"Je vous recontacterai," he said, to Édouard.
I translated, more out of habit than necessity. “He’ll be in touch.”
We stood. Cole shook Édouard’s hand first, then mine — the same brief, dry grip as before. He didn’t walk us to the car. A young man I hadn’t noticed before appeared from somewhere near the stable and led us back across the gravel.
I didn’t look back.
In the car, Édouard settled into the passenger seat with the particular satisfaction of a man who had eaten well. He waited until we’d cleared the main gate before he spoke.
"Ça s’est bien passé," he said.
I kept my eyes on the road. “He didn’t say yes.”
"Mais il a pris le dossier." He smiled and left it at that.
I didn’t answer. I was thinking about something small and irritating that had settled somewhere in the back of my mind between the terrace and the car.
He hadn’t asked my name. Not once. Not at the fence, not on the terrace, not when he shook my hand goodbye. Édouard had never introduced me and Cole Whitfield had never thought to ask.
I’d built LiveStock IQ from nothing. Four years, two failed funding rounds, seventeen clients who now ran their operations on something I’d coded at a kitchen table at two in the morning.
The irritation was disproportionate. I knew that. It wasn’t the first time a man had assumed I was someone’s assistant and it wouldn’t be the last.
It still sat wrong.









Gripped, can't wait to read the rest of the story. 🥰
Men, think they rule the world 🌎 Joanna, will show, she's not a translator 💪
How rude not to be introduce irregardless you or an assistant or not. A proper introduction is always required when meeting someone and hurry and get him out of your business before he backstabs you for pebbles.