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Rise of devil corporation

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Episode 01:-devil corporation kingdom call Warning: This chapter contains scenes of blood, violence, and gore. Reader discretion is advised. Ek kingdom mein chillahat goonj rahi hai. Aasmaan se kaale paron wale monster utarte hain aur logon ko zinda khane lagte hain. Dhool, khoon aur cheekhein – har taraf maut ka raaj hai. Log mar rahe hain. Usi bheed mein ek vyaapaari hai, jo bohot ghayal ho chuka hai. Uske shareer se khoon beh raha hai. Apni puri himmat ikatthi karke usne phone uthaya aur 911 dial kiya. Phone uthte hi vyaapaari kaanpta hua bola, "Help me." Turant aasmaan se ek ship utra. Us par "Devil Corporation" ka logo chamak raha tha. Gate khula aur David apni team ke saath bahar aaya. Bina kuch kahe wo seedha monsters ki taraf badha. Bas teen minute mein saare monsters khatam. David ne doctor ko ishara kiya. Doctor ne ek device se vyaapaari ka zakhm turant thik kar diya. Bache hue logon ne David ko jaan bachane ke liye dhanyavaad kiya. Usi bheed mein se ek ghayal soldier nikla. Usne David ko salute maara, aur dar ke mare uske muh se nikal gaya, "Red Demons..." Logon mein santata chha gaya. David muskuraya aur us soldier se bola, "Ab main wo David nahi raha." Tabhi door ek mahal se ek saaya David ko dekh raha tha. Uski awaaz sirf David ke kaan mein goonji, "Kya tum mujhe bhool gay ho? To be continued... Writer's Note: Oh my god! Kya entry thi David aur us

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
11
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Episode 01:-devil corporation kingdom call

Warning: This chapter contains scenes of blood, violence, and gore. Reader discretion is advised.


Ek kingdom mein chillahat goonj rahi hai.


Aasmaan se kaale paron wale monster utarte hain aur logon ko zinda khane lagte hain.


Dhool, khoon aur cheekhein – har taraf maut ka raaj hai.


Log mar rahe hain. Usi bheed mein ek vyaapaari hai, jo bohot ghayal ho chuka hai. Uske shareer se khoon beh raha hai. Apni puri himmat ikatthi karke usne phone uthaya aur 911 dial kiya.


Phone uthte hi vyaapaari kaanpta hua bola, "Help me."


Turant aasmaan se ek ship utra. Us par "Devil Corporation" ka logo chamak raha tha.


Gate khula aur David apni team ke saath bahar aaya. Bina kuch kahe wo seedha monsters ki taraf badha. Bas teen minute mein saare monsters khatam.


David ne doctor ko ishara kiya. Doctor ne ek device se vyaapaari ka zakhm turant thik kar diya. Bache hue logon ne David ko jaan bachane ke liye dhanyavaad kiya.


Usi bheed mein se ek ghayal soldier nikla. Usne David ko salute maara, aur dar ke mare uske muh se nikal gaya, "Red Demons..."


Logon mein santata chha gaya.


David muskuraya aur us soldier se bola, "Ab main wo David nahi raha."


Tabhi door ek mahal se ek saaya David ko dekh raha tha. Uski awaaz sirf David ke kaan mein goonji,


"Kya tum mujhe bhool gaye?"


To be continued...


Writer's Note:

Oh my god! Kya entry thi David aur uski team ki! 🔥 Bas teen minute mein poore maidan ko saaf kar diya! Par jab us zakhmi soldier ne use 'Red Demons' bulaya, toh sabki tarah mere bhi rongte khade ho gaye! 😱

David ne kaha ki 'Ab main wo David nahi raha'... par end mein wo kiski aawaz thi jo sirf David ko sunai di? "Kya tum mujhe bhool gaye?" 👀 Kya yeh wahi Dimitri hai jise humne flashback mein dekha tha, ya fir koi naya purana dushman?

Aapko kya lagta hai, yeh saaya kiska ho sakta hai? Apni saari khatarnak theories comments me zaroor share karein! Aur haan, agar episode pasand aaya ho toh Vote aur Comment karna bilkul mat bhoolna. Agla episode bohot jald aayega, stay tuned! 🖤✨

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