What is your opinion?
Excellent Beginning!
"I really enjoyed and am hooked as in I want to know what is going to happen. Well done on doing that in just three short chapters. Really exciting prospects here. Keep it up your heading in a wonderful direction. CETurner"
A winner!
"This is movie material! I only suggest bookmarking www.online-spellcheck.com. It helps me. :)"
good start
"I think this could branch into I really interesting novel/short story, but I'm a bit confused about the plot. If this is just fantasy then I guess it's fine, but full body recoveries aren't possible (Like a brain transplant?). The descriptions are really vivid, but always remember to pace yourself. Overall, this has a lot of potential! I'd appreciate some advice on my story too, if you wouldn't mind. One last thing, why is this under scifi? Isn't that like aliens..."
