What is your opinion?
Love the story
"I love this book so farther story is interesting and it's one of those stories that you start and just can't stop reading. Really great book. Characters have great personalities. Just wish Blake would have asked her out already and that she would agree. Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to when you decide to update again."
Sophie
"Really enjoying the book can't wait to see what happens hopefully Sophie will stay with her biological father and I have a great life "
sophie
"I really like this story. It has drama, love of family, action, and you name it. I can not wait for the next chapter to see what is going to happen."
Awesome
"I love it when do u usually update"
Sophie
"It's a good book.I love how the author portrays the father and daughter relationship. This is my fifth or so time reading it again."
Sophie
"Please at least give us a hint if something is gonna happen between sophia and blake. And im going crazy why do des and nathan hate each other?"
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Sophie
"Love the story, plot and the style. Keep writing. I love your style and I love the characters and the way you display their emotions is awesome Keep writing Good luck in whatever you want to do or be. 😆💗"
Noooooooooo! Katy!?
"{SPOILER ALERT FOR ANYONE NOT HAVING READ THIS STORY} [Go read it! Then you can read this.] I thought you had this finished? I was addicted to this thing! Grrr. Ok. Anyway, I loved it. If you haven’t guessed. I know I said earlier how you had a lot of type-o’s and you said this was first a draft. So, 2 points about 1st Drafts. 1) First Drafts are to be cherished. Prized even. Because they are a landmark for a writer. That you have overcome the greatest hurdle that lies between you. And a published work. You have written it down. That is a big deal. 2nd point? Never ever ever ever never EVER F’n never! Let anyone see your first draft. Only two things can happen. Many times BOTH at the same time. The other person will critique it to the point that you start to feel you cannot do this writing thing. OR they tell you a bunch of crap you already know. Like me talking about the grammar? As for the story. LOVED it!... Buuuuut???? You know, Nathan, Justin and Blake are all pretty much the same guy. Right? You really need to dig into them and expound on some differences. Cause right now you could ditch Justin and Blake. And just say [Nathan has a crappy car and can’t park.] And the story would stay the same. Also, I know you want to express how she doesn’t want to be hurt by Chuck again. But I would review those conversations. The dialogue is NOT verbatim. But the conversation she has one day with Nathan sounds pretty much the same as the one she has with Justin the next day. So the big one. NOT THAT YOU HAVE TO DO THIS. But some of your dialogue had me thinking Beatty was the one that had kept her Father away all those years. And I was starting to think she was the one that killed her mom. Not sure of that is a direction you want to go in or not. Last thing. I swear. You stated she can’t swim because she is from Texas. That -is- gonna piss somebody off. Weall swim just fine here. The summers are a nightmare here. So all of us are in a lake or a river or a pool. I would change that to some other reason that won’t get you a bunch of hate comments from literate rednecks… like me:) So in closing. LOVED THIS! 5 STARS across the board easily. Except for grammar. Sorry. Looking forward to the rest though."
Intriguing Read
"Great plot line in this book, supported strongly by adept characterization. An quick easy, gripping read that engages the reader from start to finish. I highly recommend :)"
Sophie
" The plot of this book is intriguing and really captivating, it has character and it's not just shallow, it is fantasy that is surprisingly very relatable. The author though still has alot to learn about punctuations, the words are crammed together and this can be very tiring. If the issue of punctuations is addressed then all will be awesome."
