The dark horse

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Summary

The storm over Blackwood Valley did not arrive with rain. It came with a heavy, suffocating heat that turned the midnight sky the color of a plum.

Genre
Action
Author
Arizona
Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 the Midnight Colt

The storm over Blackwood Valley did not arrive with rain. It came with a heavy, suffocating heat that turned the midnight sky the color of a bruised plum.Inside the birthing stall of the O’Malley ranch, Silas stood knee-deep in fresh straw. His lantern cast long, dancing shadows against the timber walls. Beside him, a prize-winning mare lay exhausted, her flank heaving.Silas wiped grease and sweat from his forehead. He had spent forty years breeding thoroughbreds. He knew the genetics of speed. He knew the geometry of bone and muscle. But as the foal finally slid into the world, Silas took a step back, his breath catching in his throat.The colt was entirely black. Not the common charcoal grey that fades with age, but a deep, light-absorbing obsidian. He had no white socks, no star on his forehead, and no blazes. He seemed made of the shadow itself."He looks like trouble," muttered Ben, the young stable hand, peering over the wooden gate. "A bad omen, Silas. Look at his eyes."Silas knelt. The foal was already struggling to his feet, his long, spindly legs shaking but determined. When the colt turned his head toward the lantern light, his eyes did not reflect the usual soft amber. They were a piercing, intelligent silver."He’s not an omen, Ben," Silas whispered, reaching out a trembling hand. The colt didn't flinch. Instead, he pressed his wet muzzle firmly into Silas’s palm. "He's a dark horse."The storm over Blackwood Valley did not arrive with rain. It came with a heavy, suffocating heat that turned the midnight sky the color of a bruised plum.Inside the birthing stall of the O’Malley ranch, Silas stood knee-deep in fresh straw. His lantern cast long, dancing shadows against the timber walls. Beside him, a prize-winning mare lay exhausted, her flank heaving.Silas wiped grease and sweat from his forehead. He had spent forty years breeding thoroughbreds. He knew the genetics of speed. He knew the geometry of bone and muscle. But as the foal finally slid into the world, Silas took a step back, his breath catching in his throat.The colt was entirely black. Not the common charcoal grey that fades with age, but a deep, light-absorbing obsidian. He had no white socks, no star on his forehead, and no blazes. He seemed made of the shadow itself."He looks like trouble," muttered Ben, the young stable hand, peering over the wooden gate. "A bad omen, Silas. Look at his eyes."Silas knelt. The foal was already struggling to his feet, his long, spindly legs shaking but determined. When the colt turned his head toward the lantern light, his eyes did not reflect the usual soft amber. They were a piercing, intelligent silver."He’s not an omen, Ben," Silas whispered, reaching out a trembling hand. The colt didn't flinch. Instead, he pressed his wet muzzle firmly into Silas’s palm. "He's a dark horse."

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