What is your opinion?
The Ghostly Killer
"I would try to draw people in more in the beginning, and also not be as wordy. I have that issue as well and I'm working on it. Other than that, there are some spelling errors and grammatical errors you need to fix. Overall it's a good read!"
Great Beginning
"This is a great start, I look forward to more. There are a few spelling mistakes but they are easy fixed, just give it a read through out loud and that will help you find them. I urge you to continue on with it as it could be a wonderful book. :-) CETurner"
Good so far...
"I thought that so far, it's pretty great. It does have a few misspellings, and the last paragraph is pretty long, but other than that, I applaud it. The story is great, and I like how the action starts right off the bat. Keep working on it, don't give up!"
