The House That Remembers by Authoress Debbie at Inkitt
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The House That Remembers

Summary

Some houses keep memories. This one keeps secrets. After returning to his late parents' hometown, Michael discovers an abandoned house whispered about in fear by the locals. Strange dreams, forgotten truths, and a dark family secret begin to surface. But the deeper he digs, the more he realizes the house isn't just remembering the past... It's waiting for him.

Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

📖 MY FIRST STORY


Welcome to my storytelling page. I share stories that inspire, entertain, and teach lessons.


Here is my first story...


The House That Remembers


[Chapter 1


Written by Debbie Vale


"Something is in the room with me... and it knows my name."


Victoria Island, Lagos never truly slept. Even at night, the city buzzed with life — car horns, distant music, and the glow of high-rise buildings piercing the darkness.


Among the powerful and the wealthy lived Michael Adebayo.


He was tall, dark-skinned, and strikingly handsome. At 6'2, with sharp features and calm, unreadable eyes, he carried himself with effortless elegance.


Women admired him. Business partners respected him. His phone never stopped ringing — brands seeking collaboration, companies requesting meetings, and investors chasing deals.


He owned houses across Lagos and Abuja. Cars lined his garage. His name carried weight.


But none of it filled the emptiness inside him.


Michael lost his parents at a very young age. One night, they went to bed. The next morning, they never woke up.


No struggle.

No warning.

No clear explanation.


When he demanded answers, people avoided his questions. Eventually, his uncle told him it was an illness — a rare disease.


But something about that explanation never felt right. And deep down, Michael knew it.


That evening, after an exhausting day of meetings and negotiations, he returned to his penthouse overlooking the Atlantic.


He loosened his tie, poured himself a glass of water, and collapsed onto his bed.


Sleep came quickly.


But sleep did not bring peace.


He saw himself standing in his father's old compound — the one from his childhood.


The air felt heavy. Too quiet.


Confused, he looked around. Then he saw them.


His parents.


They stood a few metres away, staring at him.


"Mum? Dad?" His voice trembled.


He tried to run towards them, but an invisible force held him back. No matter how hard he pushed, he couldn't move forward.


That was when he noticed it.


His mother's eyes were red. Not from crying.


Red — glowing faintly in the dark.


She looked terrified.


She was saying something, her lips moving urgently, as if warning him.


But he couldn't hear a single word.


Then suddenly...


Black smoke began to rise from the ground.


It wrapped around them.


Covered them.


Swallowed them whole.


"No!" Michael screamed.


And woke up.


His room was dark. Silent.


But his heart was racing.


And then he heard it.


A whisper.


Soft.


Close.


"Michael..."

Michael jolted awake, shaking violently. His body was drenched in sweat, his chest rising and falling rapidly as though he had been running for his life.


For a moment, he couldn't tell what was real.


The dream.

The black smoke.

His mother's worried face.

His father's pale expression.

The red eyes.


And then... the voice.


It was something else.


Something unfamiliar.


Something that did not belong.


The memories replayed in his mind like a broken record. He pressed his palms against his temples, trying to steady himself.


His past was resurfacing.


And he hated it.


He had spent years avoiding his father's house—avoiding the silence, the unanswered questions, and the pain.


But now...


Curiosity burned stronger than fear.


Maybe—just maybe—the house held something.


A clue.


A truth.


Anything connected to his parents' mysterious death.


The next morning, he dressed for work, but his mind wasn't there. Words seemed distant during meetings.


Faces blurred.


By noon, he cancelled everything.


By evening, he was packing a small suitcase.


The following day, he drove to the village.


He arrived at his parents' house just before sunset.


The compound stood still—abandoned.


The air felt thick.


Heavy.


Like it had been holding its breath for years.


What was once a place filled with laughter now felt lifeless.


The wind moved through the trees, carrying dust and something else...


Something that felt like a memory.


Suddenly, the wind grew stronger, swirling around him.


Dust rose into the air.


Michael's heartbeat quickened.


Fear crept into his spine.


But he did not move.


Then he heard it.


Whispers.


Faint.


Unclear.


And then—


"Michael"...


His blood ran cold.


It was the same voice from his dream.


Slow.


Clear.


Close.


He swallowed hard.


And in that moment, a chilling thought crossed his mind:


Why does this house carry so many memories?


And why do they feel... alive?


And in that moment, a chilling thought crossed his mind.


Why does this house carry so many memories?

And why do they feel... alive?


Michael tried to ignore the wind. Even though he had heard his name whispered softly—strange and unclear—he convinced himself it was his imagination.


Hallucination.


Stress.


Nothing more.


Slowly, he reached for the door. It resisted slightly before opening with a long, painful creak.


Dust floated in the air. Old furniture stood covered in white sheets. A family portrait hung on the wall, cracked across his father's face.


His childhood room remained untouched.


Frozen in time.


He swallowed hard and walked into his parents' bedroom. Memories flooded him instantly. He began searching—drawers, shelves, under the wardrobe—like a man desperate for answers.


Then he saw it.


A strange symbol drawn faintly on the wall behind the curtain.


His heart skipped a beat.


He quickly pulled out his phone and took a photo.


As he stepped back, something caught his eye.


An old wooden box beneath the bed.


Dusty.


Forgotten.


He dragged it out and opened it carefully.


Inside were documents, photographs, and old papers—pieces of a story long buried.


Then he found it.


A letter.


His hands trembled as he opened it.


The words were short.


Clear.


Terrifying.


"It does not take strangers. It takes blood."


His blood ran cold. Sweat gathered on his forehead.


Without thinking, he grabbed the box and rushed out of the house.


The drive to his uncle's house felt longer than usual. His mind raced, replaying every detail.


When he arrived, Uncle Kayode was seated outside, calmly reading a newspaper. The sound of Michael's car screeching into the compound made him look up sharply.


Michael stepped out.


"Uncle... we need to talk."


Moments later, they sat facing each other. Michael placed the letter in his uncle's hands.


"What does this mean?"


Uncle Kayode read the note slowly.


Michael watched his expression carefully.


The color drained from his face.


Silence stretched between them.


Finally, he spoke, his voice low.


"Your father tried to end it."


He paused.


"But some things cannot be ended."

Another pause.

"They can only be passed on."

Michael froze.

Then Uncle Kayyyyyode looked directly into his eyes.

now... it knows you.

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