What is your opinion?
Stars
"This story was sweet. It showed loved, promise, and hope for more. There is also the cliff hanger that you are left on. I loved it. -Dana Wright"
Brought me back
"Cool story. Loved that it took place in the junk yard. This was nice."
Romantic!!
"It's a quite Romantic moment, and I love how you put the funny hat into each person which I admire. In my head I can differentiate between Rachel and Chloe as soon as you give me the hints of which Chloe is the blue haired girl, like music with tempo and easy going compared with Rachel who wore Chloe's jacket and i assumed it would be a colourful jacket since Chloe got a blue hair and she likes less-tempo music which i also assumed that she might be a bit quiet and shy but also she likes to asking question to Chloe and i think she might be a bit possesive and easily jealous kind of person. Well at least it was what I catched. But overall good story, really easy to read :)"
Brilliant!
"I could feel myself being pulled into the story, lying on a mattress alongside Chloe, staring at the stars. Your world-building is magical and effective. I love the dialogue and the way you manage to draw the story from the shores of normality to uneasiness; it gave me goose bumps. Love this story."
Wow
"This was such a beautiful first chapter. It was well written and really showed the vulnerability of first love in such a lovely way. Can’t wait to read more ..."
Stars
"I really like the concept of stars and how the writer projects a thing that we rarely care about so beautifully. "
