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Greeting And Appreciation Request!!

"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. Your story has the perfect balance of emotion and intrigue that deserves to be visually brought to life. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that captures character depth and dynamic world building. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan."

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Must read adventure. :)

"Fantastic book with a great storyline and well thought out characters. I highly recommend this book to anyone. What an adventure to escape the rainy grey days of the British winter. 😃"

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Loved it so much i got a tattoo

"I loved this novel. I read it a few years ago and it really struck me. I even made a concept art for it and got it the quote, “for tomorrow we die.” And my design tattooed on me. I think i captured the essence of the story well. It was amazingly written and i would read again. "

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"Thoroughly enjoyed the story, characters and plot. Good twists and turns. Looking forward to seeing more from you in the future."

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The Mourn Trail

"I love the story! Adventure packed. The stories of friendship made me fall in love with it more. Is there a sequel already? "

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The Mourn Trail

"I really enjoyed this story, action, adventure and intrigue, and a tiny hint of romance,the author worked hard to be entertaining and did not disappoint "

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The Mourn Trail

"Great tale. Liked it🌹"

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Fascinating

"The story is great, filled with moments of all emotions. But it does need editing as several sentences have dropped words, wrong words, and misspelled words. "

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Happy I found this book!

"This book was a wonderful surprise! I loved the progression of the story! Some names exchanged once or twice, but it doesn't take away from the story. Good work Author, I'm so glad I stumbled on to this book!"

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Amazing!

"That was beautifully written. I was thoroughly entranced the entire story and I cried at least twice."

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Absolutely brilliant and something you’ll never except

"Sometimes finding good content on apps like this can be a struggle until you fall across gems like this. I’m someone who can be really picky with what books I like but I can honestly say this book was brilliant. It wasn’t your stereotypical strong damaged female lead. There were twists and turns I was never excepting. The tone and language used was absolutely spot on and I can’t wait to see more of this sort of content from this author :)"

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Midevil adventures

"Some misspelled or misused words but overall a great adventure story. It is very different than most stories I've read. Very good read"

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An excellent novel “the mourn trail “

"This book is so amazing I would advise everyone if possible to read it....This writer is out of this world "

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The mourn trail

"There are some spelling mistakes and character mix ups like Prince jushua."

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The Mourn Trail

"Awsome book. I have overlooked it many times before and now i regret not having found it sooner. Keep on writing and i look forward to more stories."

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Amazing

"Keeps you engaged the whole way through. Great character development. "

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The Mourn

"Absolutely loving this story. Well written, great characters. Thanks for a great read."

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Marvellous

"Very good story, very good story line, correctors "

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Wonderful Read

"The plot was satisfying to say the least. I enjoyed the charters and the growth and change in all of them. Loved the twist, don’t expect that. And I am unsatisfied with the ending but I’ll live. I doubt there will be a sequel but a girl can hope, all in all amazing story. "

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The story was epic ...was stuck to the screen for two days straight

"I liked the plot ..the characters and the twists to it..one of the best books I've read.."

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