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Brilliant.

"I loved this, the ending really highlighted the idea of persepctive and what really matters. I also enjoyed his this story got to the point, it didn't ramble on unnecessarily or give details that didn't enhance the plot and I think that really helped to emphaises the meaning. It was just brilliant."

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impressive!

"Though it is a very short story, it is full of emotions. "Ratio of Loss" makes you look at your problems in a different light. I wished there was more to read. Maybe worth considering? Well done, Dris, and thank you for this impressive story!"

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Powerful

"For being very short, I thought the story was very affecting. It puts things into perspective not only for the protagonist of your story, but also the reader. I wanted there to be more, but it did its job as it was. ;)"

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