01 - The Last Ordinary Morning
Chapter 1 — The Last Ordinary Morning
Scene 1 – Twenty-Three Dollars
[INT. CALEB’S APARTMENT – KITCHEN – EARLY MORNING]
(A cramped studio apartment. Morning light cuts through blinds that don’t fully close, striping the floor. A sagging couch with a blanket and pillow, clearly where someone sleeps. No dining table. No TV. A milk crate of textbooks. On a shelf: a few framed photos, dusted, untouched.)
(CALEB HAYES, 19, messy dark hair, dark circles, cheap hoodie, stands at the counter. A cheap coffee maker sputters out its last hiss.)
(He sips from a chipped mug. Grimaces.)
Caleb (muttering, to no one): “...Yeah. Still awful.”
(He drinks it anyway. Picks up the coffee bag. Shakes it once. Nothing. Twice. A few lonely grains fall into the filter.)
Caleb (dry): “...Guess that’s tomorrow’s problem.”
(A faint smile tugs at his mouth. It doesn’t last.)
(His eyes drift to the shelf. One photo: his MOTHER, healthy, laughing, her arm around ten year-old Caleb in a little league soccer uniform.)
(He looks away first.)
(His phone BUZZES on the counter.)
PHONE SCREEN: UNKNOWN NUMBER
(Caleb goes completely still. The phone buzzes again. And again. He doesn’t move. It stops.)
(Silence. Then, a chime.)
PHONE SCREEN: 1 NEW MESSAGE — “We’re done waiting.”
(Caleb stares at the screen for a long moment. Locks it without opening the message. His hand isn’t quite steady.)
(He pulls out his wallet. Counts the cash. We see it: twenty-three dollars.)
Caleb (quietly, to the coffee mug): “...Guess lunch loses again.”
(He shoulders a backpack that’s fraying at the seams. At the door, he pauses. Looks back at the apartment.)
Caleb: “...See you later.”
(Beat. He isn’t sure who he said it to. The door closes.)
Scene 2 – Room 214
[INT. ST. AUGUSTINE HOSPITAL – HALLWAY – MORNING]
(Fluorescent lights. Too clean. Too quiet. Caleb walks a familiar path he doesn’t check the room numbers. He stops at ROOM 214. Takes one slow breath. Knocks.)
Mother: “Come in.”
(He puts the smile on BEFORE opening the door. We see him do it.)
[INT. HOSPITAL ROOM 214 – CONTINUOUS]
(A small room. Machines hum quietly. HIS MOTHER, 40s, thinner than the photo on his shelf, sits up with a crossword puzzle on her lap. Her face lights up.)
Caleb: “Morning, Mom.”
Mother: “There he is.” (studying him)
Mother: “You look tired.”
Caleb: “I always look tired.”
Mother: “That’s true.”
(They both laugh. Small. Brief. Real.)
(She reaches over and fixes a strand of his messy hair, the automatic gesture of someone who’s done it for nineteen years.)
Mother: “When’s the last time you slept?”
Caleb: “...Last night.”
Mother: “Caleb.”
Caleb: “What?”
Mother: “That wasn’t an answer.”
Caleb (shrugging): “It was technically an answer.”
Mother (rolling her eyes): “You always were a smart mouth.”
Caleb: “I learned from somebody.”
Mother: “Oh really?”
Caleb: “Yep.”
Mother: “Must’ve been your father.”
Caleb (pulling a chair beside her bed): “I don’t know... I think it was definitely you.”
(She laughs again. For a moment, the room feels normal — like the machines aren’t there, like the bills don’t exist.)
(Then, gently)
Mother: “...How’s school?”
Caleb: “It’s good.”
Mother: “Liar.”
Caleb: “...It’s okay.”
Mother: “Better. And work?”
Caleb: “...Busy.”
Mother: “Enough hours?”
Caleb: “Yeah.”
(A beat. She looks at him. She knows. He knows she knows. She doesn’t push. Instead, she squeezes his hand.)
Mother: “You’re taking care of everybody except yourself.”
Caleb (looking away): “...I’m trying.”
Mother: “I know.”
(Silence settles. Comfortable and heavy at once. Then she smiles softly.)
Mother: “God’s taking care of us.”
Caleb (nodding, not meeting her eyes): “...Yeah.”
(A NURSE knocks, leans in.)
Nurse: “Sorry, vitals check.”
Caleb (standing): “That’s my cue.”
(His mother catches his sleeve.)
Mother: “Eat something today.”
Caleb: “I will.”
Mother: “Something that isn’t coffee.”
Caleb: “...I’ll try.”
Mother (smiling up at him, small, tired, still hers): “Love you, sweetheart.”
Caleb: “Love you too, Mom.”
(He closes the door gently behind him.)
[INT. HOSPITAL HALLWAY – CONTINUOUS]
(Empty hallway. Caleb stands there a moment, backpack strap gripped in one fist, staring at nothing.)
(Then — quietly, barely moving his lips)
Caleb: “...God. If You’re there... she doesn’t deserve this. So if You could just—”
(A cart rattles past. A machine beeps somewhere down the hall. Ordinary noise. No answer.)
(A long pause.)
Caleb: “...Never mind. Forget it.”
(He walks to the elevator. He doesn’t look back.)
Scene 3 – A Distinguished Nose
[INT. LECTURE HALL – DAY]
(A large economics lecture. The PROFESSOR draws a supply curve on the board. Caleb sits near the back, notebook open. He has written six words. His eyes are somewhere else entirely.)
[INT. WAREHOUSE – AFTERNOON – MONTAGE]
(Boxes. Tape gun. Conveyor belt. Repeat. Caleb works without expression, one more body on the line. The clock crawls from 1:00 to 6:00.)
[EXT. BUS STOP – EVENING]
(Golden hour. Caleb sits on a bench. At the far end, an OLD MAN tosses crumbs to a pigeon that struts like it owns the block.)
(Caleb’s hands pull out a worn sketchbook before he’s decided to. Pencil. Quick lines, the hunch of the man’s shoulders, the pigeon’s little tyrant walk.)
Old Man (without turning): “You drawing me?”
Caleb (freezing): “...Kind of. Sorry.”
Old Man: “Lemme see.”
(Caleb turns the page around. The old man squints at it a long moment.)
Old Man: “Nose is too big.”
Caleb: “That’s your nose.”
Old Man: “My nose is distinguished.”
Caleb: “That’s what I drew. A distinguished nose.”
(The old man LAUGHS, a real one, from the chest. The bus pulls up. Caleb tears out the page and hands it over without thinking about it.)
Caleb: “Keep it.”
Old Man: “You should charge for these.”
Caleb (stepping onto the bus): “Yeah. Maybe I should..."
[INT. BUS – MOVING – EVENING]
(Caleb takes a window seat. Streetlights flicker on one by one as the city slides past. His reflection watches him in the glass.)
(For a few minutes, he looks almost okay.)
Scene 4 – Merchant Street
[EXT. FIFTH STREET – NIGHT]
(Caleb walks home. He passes a GRAY SEDAN, parked, engine running. His step falters, barely.)
(A flash of memory: the same sedan, that morning, outside the hospital. Pretty sure. Almost sure.)
(He keeps walking. His phone buzzes.)
PHONE SCREEN: MOM — “Did you eat?”
(He types while walking:)
PHONE SCREEN: “Yeah. Chicken and rice.”
(His thumb hovers over SEND. It’s a lie. The third one today. He doesn’t press it yet.)
(Behind him, footsteps. Matching his pace.)
(Caleb’s jaw tightens. He turns down MERCHANT STREET, a narrow cut through. No cameras. One working streetlight. He knows it’s a mistake while he’s making it.)
[EXT. MERCHANT STREET ALLEY – CONTINUOUS]
(The footsteps follow him in. Then. a second set, from the front.)
(Caleb stops.)
(TWO MEN block the alley. The BIGGER ONE, Caleb recognizes. He was there the day Caleb signed the paper. He’d stood behind the desk the whole time and never said a word.)
Big Man: "Caleb Hayes?"
(Caleb turns around)
Caleb: "Yeah?"
Big Man (flat, like reading an invoice): “You’ve been hard to reach.”
Caleb (steadier than he expected): “Look, I get paid Friday. I told Marcus. Friday, I can—”
Big Man: "You know what happens when people stop answering, Hayes."
(A pause)
Big Man: "Nothing personal.”
(Second Man reaching into his jacket)
(The GUN comes out. It looks small. In movies they look bigger.)
(Caleb stands very still. His heart should be pounding. It isn’t, and underneath the fear there’s a stillness he recognizes from the worst nights of his life, and it scares him more than the gun does.)
Caleb (thought): Mom’s alone. That’s the only—
(MOVEMENT. Above and to the left.)
(Second-floor window over the closed laundromat. A small face between the curtains a GIRL, maybe seven, eyes huge, staring down at the alley.)
Second Man: "Yo.."
Big Man: "What?"
(The Big Man slightly looks back)
Second Man: "We got eyes.."
(Second Man nodded his head toward the window)
(The Big Man looks back at Caleb and catches Caleb’s glance. Turns. Follows it up. Sees her.)
Second Man: "What now?"
(Second Man pauses)
Second Man: "It's only a kid."
Big Man: "I see her. So what?"
(Big Man pauses)
Big Man: "Deal with it."
(Second Man nods)
(The gun begins to move toward the window.)
(Caleb sees the motion in the corner of his eye)
(His body instantly starts running, )
(No thought. No decision. Just the crate against the wall,the drainpipe, hands and feet finding places to be. Nineteen years of getting out of the way, and the one time it matters, he puts himself directly into it.)
(He SLAMS into the second man’s arm as the shot goes off. It’s louder than he expected. Everything about tonight keeps being different than he expected.)
Scene 5 – Unsent
[EXT. MERCHANT STREET ALLEY – CONTINUOUS]
(Caleb suddenly feels a sharp pain in his chest)
Caleb: "Sh--"
(Big Man looks back at his partner)
Big Man: "Idiot! What the hell are you doing?!"
(Second Man looks shook and his arm starts shaking )
Second Man: "It wasn't my fault! He came at m-"
Big Man: "You messed up the plan! Big Boss won't be happy."
Second Man: "Bu-"
Big Man: "MOVE!"
(The Big Man turns around and begins to run off)
(The Second Man hesitated but runs after him)
(Caleb falls onto the pavement while holding his chest)
(Pavement cold against Caleb’s cheek.)
(In the gutter, inches from his face: his phone. Face up. Glowing.)
PHONE SCREEN: “Yeah. Chicken and rice.” — UNSENT
Caleb (faint, fading): ...sorry, Mom. Sorry. Sorry—
(Far away, A car door slams. Tires. And above it all, very faintly, a child, crying.)
(Alive. Crying. ALIVE.)
(Caleb’s eyes soften.)
(The light doesn’t fade the way he expects.)
(It GROWS.)
(White. Warm. Everywhere at once, like morning through blinds that never fully closed.)
(And a VOICE he has never heard before, gentle, unhurried, speaks from inside the light:)
Voice: “You still chose to protect another.”
END OF CHAPTER 1

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