The salt merchant
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The salt merchant

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Summary

Very interesting and motivating

Genre
Action
Author
Atolagbe
Status
3mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

The Salt Merchant’s Lantern

The salt pans outside the village of Idere had been dry for three seasons. Every morning, Old Baba Pa’ale would walk out to the cracked white flats, lower his bamboo basket, and return with nothing but red dust clinging to his ankles. The villagers told him to stop—that the salt ground had died with his brother—but Baba Pa’ale was stubborn.

On a moonless Tuesday, long past midnight, a faint amber flicker appeared out on the salt flats.

Thinking it was scrap-collectors or thieves, Baba Pa’ale grabbed his wooden walking stick and marched out into the cold night air. When he reached the glow, he didn't find thieves. He found a brass lantern resting directly on the salt bed, its glass stained with soot, burning with a flame that blew sideways against the wind, completely refusing to go out.

Beside the lantern sat a young girl no older than ten, wearing a faded wrapper and carefully scraping white crust into an clay pot.

"That's my land," Baba Pa’ale said, grounding his stick into the dirt. "And the salt hasn't risen here in three years."

straight up at him, her eyes bright in the lantern light. "The salt isn't in the dirt anymore, Papa. It's under the stone."

She tapped the flat rock beneath her feet. Baba Pa’ale frowned, kneeling down on his stiff knees. He knocked his knuckles against the stone. It sounded hollow—like a wooden chest buried deep in the earth.

"Who sent you here?" he asked, looking around the pitch-black horizon. There was no bicycle, no tracks, no one else in sight.

"Your brother," she said simply. "He said you were still looking in the wrong place."

Before Baba Pa’ale could speak, the girl stood up, picked up her clay pot, and walked toward the darkness. Baba Pa’ale reached out to call her back, but when he swung his lantern forward, the flat space in front of him was empty. Only the faint scent of brine remained.

The next morning, Baba Pa’ale brought two young men from the village with iron crowbars. They pried up the heavy flat stone where the lantern had rested.

Beneath it wasn't just dirt. A crystal-clear underground spring pooled in the dark cavity, thick with pure, coarse white salt—enough to feed the village for ten seasons to come.

And tucked into the rock face just above the water was a small, rusted brass key. Baba Pa’ale picked it up, wiped the salt off the handle, and quietly put it in his pocket.

             WATCH OUT FOR PART 2

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Chapter Notes

Chapter 2 Kemi’s breath hitched. She shoved the leather notebook into her back pocket, snatched the three indigo-wrapped stones, and slammed the chest lid shut just as the back door’s rusted handle began to turn. The heavy iron door groaned open. A tall figure stepped across the threshold, his shadow stretching long and sharp across the dusty concrete floor under the faint moonlight. He wore a dark jacket, wet with night dew, and carried a thick flash lamp that swept across the room like a searchlight. Kemi pressed her back flat against the stack of plastic chairs, holding her breath until her chest burned. The man stopped directly beside the trunk. He knelt, his heavy boots crunching on the stray gravel. When he reached down and felt the open padlock, a sharp, cold whistle escaped his teeth. "She was here," he muttered into a small radio clipped to his collar. "The chest is open. But the third stone is gone." A burst of static answered him, followed by a harsh, distorted voice. "Find her. She couldn't have gone far." Kemi shifted her weight to slide toward the broken side window, but her sneaker scraped against an empty tin can. The beam of light snapped directly onto her face. "Hand it over, girl," the man said, stepping forward with his hand reaching into his coat. "You have no idea what your grandfather was holding onto." Kemi didn't wait to find out. She lunged to the side, ducked under his arm, and crashed through the wooden side shutter into the cool, dark night.

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