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"El momento donde me perdí."

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Este poema es para darle visibilidad a mi antigua yo del 2021 y 2022 que no se atrevía a ni si quiera a pensar en publicar sus poemas, quiero soltar y sanar esa parte de mí que se merecía tener toda la paz que ella quería.

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Complete
Chapters
30
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n/a
Age Rating
16+

Sueños que no son mios.

una disculpa de ante mano porque eran poemas guardados y algunos tienen falta de ortografía, y aun que estuve checándolos se me pudo ir alguna, pero las cambiare de inmediato si me llegan a comentar alguna, gracias por su ayuda y también por leer mis poemas.


1- “Sueños que no son míos.”

Vivir entré los sueños de mis papás fue lo peor que pude hacer, simplemente por mí,

intenté no lastimar los y solamente me destruí,

No sabía cómo ser feliz,

Mis sueños y metas no importaban aquí,

Gran ironía los dejé vivir en mí,

No sabía si era mi culpa no entender cómo yo quería vivir,

Entré los sueños de mis padres esos sueños que yo reviví,

ahí fue dónde me perdí.


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