Compelling

"This story is about two young people, each of them with their own issues and problems. Blake dropped out of his high school after his parents died, in order to support his little brother. Alice, on the other hand, is left with the debts of her disappearing father and with people chasing after her to collect them. The story starts off dynamically and by chance, the two characters meet immediately. You have written this beginning very nicely. It is enchanting and leaves the reader eager for more. I am curious to see how Blake and Alice’s destinies will intertwine and how they will cope with their own and each other’s struggles. I cannot wait to read more."