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beaten but not defeated

"So amazing absolutely a thrill!"

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WELL DONE CHANTAL

"I read it, I cried cause I was there and I did nothing. “The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing.” - Edmund Burke A brilliant piece of work and if readers only knew..... I am so proud of you Chantal and wish you only happiness and it warms my heart to know that you are at last safe . You will always own a special place in my heart and my offer will stand till the day that I breathe my last breath - If you ever need me, for anything, I'll be there. With love"

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Beaten but NOT defeated

"I loved this so much what a great story kept me wanting to finish the next chapter to see what happened next. Such great writing. I would highly recommend this to everyone."

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Couldn’t stop reading

"Very captivating "

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Her Rejection

"I loved the story "

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Beaten but not defeated

"It was a very emotional story. My brain felt as if it was on a rollercoaster of emotions and my heart felt as if it was in a blender . The story was very gripping and had a bittersweet taste to it. "

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Beaten But NOT Defeated

"This story draws you in. I read most of it in one sitting. Liz is sweet and has much to offer. Josh has nothing to offer but death. I was so happy when Liz met Ann. She needed all the support she could get. I was honestly relieved when Caleb didn't die after all. I really think Liz could have a future with him. Some people might read this story and think that Liz was weak or possibly stupid. I believe she must have been very strong to survive all that she did. When she snuck in to kill Josh, I was just hoping she never got caught. Our author has done magnificent job and I can't wait to see what this word master will create next. 🌹"

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Nice book

"I really enjoyed it🥰"

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Beaten but not defeated

"Amazing Story. It's a must Read!!"

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Awesome

"The boom is real, feels like you can just intervene many times. Well written"

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Just amazing

"I have struggled with depression from ex torments and this book has helped me heal, I have 2 kids and I hurt everyday thinking about what he did to me.. I loved every minute of this book I cried, laughed, got angry and it literally took me on a roller coaster! Thank you for writing this."

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A page turner

"Very good story that does portray domestic abuse pretty accurately and the effects it has on its victims. Characters are very well developed."

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Love it

"I like the plot. It is very interesting that no one believes Liz. Keeps me interested"

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Harmful but harmless

"Loved the content ❤ ❤ ❤ "

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Incredible story..

"I hated how Josh treated her, also how she blamed herself for everything but this happens in real life everyday and reading this story even though I commented so harshly on her behalf I recognize that there are thousands of women out there going through this terrible abuse and it's not okay, some of us may think just because it's not happening to you that its easy to just leave but it's not because in most cases women are afraid to leave out of fear, nobody wants to be abused but its there and its horrible.. He treated women like they were nothing, he got what he deserved.. Good Story Author✌"

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An amazing yet sad story!

"This story pulled me in the moment I started reading it. I really enjoy and love it. It's hard to imagine something like this could be real. People get abused all over the world. Here's hoping they get out before it gets worse. Good work! Truly inspiring!"

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Beaten but not defeated

"I really like how detailed the author got with the story. It was like a movie playing in my head with the story."

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Beaten but Not defeated

"One of the best books I have ever read. Thrilling, touching and above all honest. I can't thank the author enough. "

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So good

"I’ve been in Liz’s shoes before.. with all the abuse she’s been through. Time heals all physical wounds. Takes an eternity to heal from the mental abuse. "

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Hello

"Wonderful story . "

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