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YES!!!

"I thought this was very funny because it is exactly how I picture romance stories. Between the constant mention of him being muscular and his "deep" emotional scars, I was fist-pumping. Also, I appreciate that you didn't get to detailed toward the end, simply because it would have been unnecessary. Good work. And good luck in the contest!"

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Casanova Sosa

"It takes some big cajones to write a story like this. An anti-hero with the animal magnetism of a black hole that teaches astrophysics to wayward teens in his spare time meets his biggest adoring fan, Wonder Woman in heat. The story needs work but has potential. The author's sheer audacity carries it like a barber with a chainsaw. A very good barber. And I'll bet this perfect specimen of a man never said a word about fight club. Yo Dude, check out The Angst and the Blur -A Tale of Katrina - when ya got time."

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Cracked me up...

"This was funny. As much as I tried to remain objective while reading it, I couldn't help but get suckered in by the charm of it. The names were priceless, and like another reviewer, I appreciated the lack of details at the end. I'd be fun to see the author's take on a successful, ball buster of a woman who can bend men in the palms of her hands. Best of luck!"

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