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The Night Flower

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📖 STORY SUMMARY Thomas Ashford has lived alone for fifteen years in a stone cottage at the edge of the world, where he cultivates a garden of plants no one else can keep alive. Among them, the most precious: the Night Flower, a legendary plant that blooms only when someone dies nearby — a death witnessed, a last breath heard. The flower is the only thing left from a life Thomas lost. He has waited three years for it to bloom. Eleanor Blackwood arrives at his door one afternoon. Young, beautiful, married, desperate. Her husband, Richard, is dying of a lung disease no doctor can cure. She heard about a flower that cures anything. Thomas tells her the truth: to save her husband, someone else has to die. The story follows two strangers bound by an impossible choice. Thomas wants the flower to bloom — but he does not want anyone to die. Eleanor wants to save her husband — but she does not know if she can kill. And between them, an attraction neither asked for, growing in silence, threatening to destroy everything. The Night Flower is a story about guilt, desire, sacrifice, and the price we are willing to pay for love. With a slow, sensory narrative, it explores what happens when two broken people meet — and discover that the only thing more dangerous than death is hope.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Thravok
Status
3d ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

CHAPTER 1 — THE GARDEN

Thomas Ashford woke before the sun, the way he always did.


There was no rooster in his yard. No animals at all, really — just the occasional stray cat that slipped through the fence at night and was gone by morning. He woke because his body had learned to wake at that hour. Fifteen years of the same routine had worn the habit into his bones.


He lay still for a moment, listening.


The cottage was quiet. The wind was gentle that morning, barely moving the thatched roof above his head. Through the small window beside his bed, he could see the sky beginning to pale — not yet blue, not yet gray, but something in between. He threw off the wool blanket and sat up.


The floor was cold against his bare feet. He had meant to fix that loose board near the hearth for months now, but he never got around to it. There was always something else to do in the garden. Always a plant that needed tending, a root that needed pulling, a bud that needed watching.


He pulled on his trousers — dark, patched at the knees — and a linen shirt that had once been white. It was gray now, the color of old paper. He did not own a mirror. He knew what he looked like: a man who spent too much time alone, with dirt under his nails and shadows under his eyes.


He stepped outside.


The morning air hit his face like cold water. It smelled of damp earth and something green and sharp, like crushed leaves. The garden was waking up. He could almost hear it. The plants did not speak, of course. But they moved. They turned. They breathed.


Thomas walked barefoot through the rows.


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The garden was his life's work.


It was not large — maybe half an acre, enclosed by a wooden fence that had been there since before he arrived. The soil was dark and rich, the kind that crumbled between your fingers and left a stain. He had spent years enriching it. Ash from his hearth. Compost from the forest floor. Other things he did not speak of.


The plants were arranged in careful rows, though the arrangement would have seemed random to anyone else. Some were tall and thin, reaching toward the sky like fingers. Others were low and sprawling, their leaves brushing the ground. Some had flowers — pale, nodding things that bloomed only in moonlight. Others had no flowers at all. Only leaves. Only roots. Only thorns.


In the center of the garden, in a small clearing surrounded by stones, stood the plant Thomas cared for most.


It was small — no taller than his hand — with leaves that were dark green on top and silver underneath. The stem was thin, almost fragile, and it swayed slightly in the breeze. At the top, a single bud, closed tight, waited.


Thomas knelt beside it.


He touched the bud with the tips of his fingers. It was cold. It was always cold — cold the way stone is cold, cold the way deep water is cold. It did not respond to sunlight or water or warmth. It responded to one thing only.


Death.


The Night Flower.


He had found the seed three years ago, in the ruins of an old library east of the village. The building had collapsed decades ago, its roof fallen in, its walls crumbling. He had gone there looking for books — old books, forgotten books, the kind no one else wanted. He had found a few, their pages yellowed and brittle. And in one of them, pressed between two pages like a dried flower, he had found the seed.


The book had crumbled to dust after he finished reading it. He remembered the words, though. Every one of them.


The Night Flower blooms only in the presence of death. It feeds on the last breath. It opens its petals only when a soul has passed nearby. The death must be witnessed. The last breath must be heard.


Thomas had planted the seed that same day.


He had watered it. Tended it. Protected it from frost and pests and the occasional curious bird. It had grown slowly — so slowly that he sometimes wondered if it was growing at all. But it was alive. He could feel it.


And for three years, it had waited.


No one had died near him. Not the old woman who lived at the edge of the village, who passed away in her sleep last winter. Not the farmer who fell from his roof two summers ago. They had died, but not near him. Not near the flower.


Thomas did not want anyone to die. He was not a killer. He was not a monster. He was a gardener. He tended things. He helped them grow.


But the flower needed death. And the flower was the only thing he had left.


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He stood up and brushed the dirt from his knees.


The sun was rising now, painting the sky in shades of pink and gold. The village would be waking soon — the baker lighting his ovens, the blacksmith stoking his forge, the children running through the streets. Thomas would not see any of it. He had not set foot in the village in months.


He walked to the front of the garden and opened the gate.


The road stretched ahead of him, empty and quiet. It was the same road that had brought him here fifteen years ago — a young man with nothing but a bag on his back and a grief so heavy he could barely breathe. He had walked for days. Weeks. Months. He had not known where he was going. He had only known he could not stay where he was.


He had found the cottage by accident. It had been abandoned. The garden had been overgrown, the fence broken, the roof leaking. He had fixed it all. He had made it his.


He had never left.


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He was still standing at the gate when he heard footsteps on the road.


They were soft. Unhurried. The footsteps of someone who was not afraid. Thomas turned his head. A woman was walking toward him, a basket on her arm. She was young — maybe twenty — with dark hair pulled back and a dress the color of wheat. He knew her. Her name was Maren. She was the baker's daughter.


She stopped at the gate.


"Thomas," she said.


He nodded. He did not speak.


"My mother sent me." She held up the basket. "Bread. She said you probably haven't eaten."


Thomas looked at the basket. Two loaves of bread. A small wheel of cheese. A jar of honey. The baker's family had always been kind to him. He did not know why.


"Thank you," he said.


He took the basket. His fingers brushed against hers. She did not pull away. She looked at him for a moment — not with pity, not with fear, but with something else.


"You look tired," she said.


"I always look tired."


She smiled. It was a small smile, but it reached her eyes. "You should come to the village more often. People ask about you."


"People?"


"My mother. The blacksmith. A few others." She paused. "Me."


Thomas looked at her. She was pretty — not in a striking way, but in a quiet way. The kind of pretty that grows on you. He had noticed her before, in the village, when he still went there. She had always smiled at him. He had always looked away.


"I don't do well in the village," he said.


"I know." She stepped closer. "That's why I came to you."


The air between them changed. She was close now, close enough that he could smell her — bread and soap and something warm underneath. She was looking up at him, her eyes dark and steady.


"You don't have to be alone," she said.


Thomas did not respond. He had been alone for so long that he had forgotten how to be anything else. But her words stirred something in him. Something he had buried deep.


He reached out and touched her face. His fingers were rough, calloused, stained with dirt. But she did not flinch. She closed her eyes and leaned into his touch.


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Later, after she had gone, Thomas sat on the edge of his bed and stared at the wall.


He did not regret what had happened. He was a man, and she was a woman, and they had both wanted it. It had been brief. Quiet. Almost tender. She had not asked for anything, and he had not promised anything. They had simply come together, the way two people sometimes do, and then she had left.


But he felt empty now. Emptier than before.


He had thought, for a moment, that being with someone would fill the silence inside him. It had not.


He stood up and walked to the window. The sun was high now, the garden bright with light. He could see the flower from here, small and still, waiting.


He had waited three years. He could wait longer.

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Hi, dear author! I just stopped by after coming across your profile. This first chapter had a lot going on, but it never felt overloaded.

I really love the concept of the Night Flower, especially the idea that it only blooms in the presence of Death or when it witnesses death. It made me wonder, though--is it only supposed to bloom when a human dies? What about other creatures? 👀

I also really admire your writing style. I love how you describe everything. It doesn’t feel rushed or desperate for the reader’s attention. It’s calm, descriptive, and atmospheric, and I really like that.

I’m definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next! Great job! ❤️

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