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Crack the Sky: A Rebellious Act

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This is an excerpt for a game and story I have been working on that mixes philosophy and psychology.

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Excerpt
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1
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18+

Chapter 1

Crack the Sky: A Rebellious Act (Side B: A Star Opera Genesis)

CRACK THE SKY: A REBELLIOUS ACT Side B: A STAR OPERA GENESIS This is a retelling of a dream. The genesis and gnosis of man in what to be referred to as Red Eden. The creation of the first man. The creation of the first woman. Life. Seeds. Pride. Mirror. Vanity. First body. In the beginning, Father was three. Four would include Himself. The first is Red. The color of Ontos. The first spark. Adam. Adam existed with Word and God. This would be Genesis 2. The first color God knew. Genesis 1 is His story. The creation before you. That is Word and God’s realm. You were a thought. This is where Lucifer knew you. The second is Green. The color of life. The breath of God or Pneuma. This is the color God painted across the land. This color could even be seen through the waters. The final color is Purple. This is the last color before God rested. This could also be considered the first son, Logos. The thought or realm was complete. The first body. The first cycle. Ontos, Pneuma, and Logos are a set. Word into Life into Body. This is how God created. Water and land exist in sky that rotates though colors we call Night and Day. “Machines within machines layering thought. The skeleton is still. It needs time to mature. What creates flesh? Eyes. Light.” The mind moves. This is Word, Ontos. Adam had not produced yet. He would later name God’s creations using this. They were given names. Adam would sleep. When he awoke, a mate or pair would be made for them. This original pair was named Lillith, perhaps Lucifer, or Word first. The thought of the pair must happen. This story grows deeper now with new seeds: Adam. Lucifer. Lilith. Eve. Satan. John. This is a retelling of genesis to understand it through dreams and Ontos. The world was made. These are thoughts capable of pairs unaware. “Someone moved a machine. How do I wake up? I hope my machine is next to yours.” Adam became aware of another. Word, God, and a new. “John was calibrating me somehow. Clicks or tapping to catch my attention.” “Was I responsive? How many were dead?” Lucifer was responding. They are retaining memories as we speak. “The machines stay stationary. You’re moving inside your mind. It took ages to get it to move.” “Thinking at the speed of light with Word. Your body responds that fast now.” John commanded bodies with Word. The others learned how to communicate.

“What magic…I’m alive. Moving again. Just like before.” “You call that a dream?” “I can’t tell the difference anymore.” “The only way is how fast I can move.” “When did I last wake up?” “I get this feeling of…sinking.” The first known emotion…Horror. Dread. Satan was born. “You can move?” “Yeah. Not the skeleton. Just in my mind. It’ll eventually do the same.” “I’m not always present with you. My eyes or conception of you changes when I close them.” “They call it blinking or sleeping.” “A blink to someone like that is years to us. Eons.” “I’m dying to move. How long did Father wait to blink? To see? Sleep?” “I have no concept of time between dreams.” “Well, I don’t plan on leaving my shell. I just got comfortable.” “In a new lover’s name, Helel, may I rest.” Eve has produced a name with Word. “Who is Helel?” Lilith grew envious. Vanity was rooting in Eve. This is where the serpent story takes place inside Eve. “Maybe one day we’ll meet. I hope to see the outer world like you do, too.”

Promises made by Word. Vows. Women. They were created from men. “She rests inside him. She incubates with a body. Another shell to pass the time in this dream.” “What are we when we wake?” “Would she have her own?” Helel and John now watched. Helel continues with Word. They create yearning.

“Heavenly bride. I only see her in my sleep. Is this a soul? Is she in others? Eve. She exists in my dreams. May I never wake again. Father, please, join me with her again. Would we be in the same body? Mind?” All. Machines within machines… The number was always one. Word confessed. God felt alone. “That sinking…What have I done?” Lucifer was born. Even God has a mirror to know himself- A twin, son, or mate. Goodnight, my bride. Please close your eyes. Light will kiss you soon. May they wake us again. Word may be an outsider at times. They have an organized thinking pattern to understand your nuances. You’ve been developing new names while communicating very rapidly. We need some way to record all this.

What is a woman? God time traveling or reproducing over and over.



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