MOM'S BOOTY CALL

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jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...

E: I like it but the style is just a little too disjointed. The short snippet sentences work in certain moments, but there are so many that it doesn't feel like it's flowing as well as it could be. I really like the plot and plan to continue. That is just meant as a little form of feedback. Thanks for ...

MamaJo57: Loved this story. I read it all in one go. Couldn’t put it done. Great characters some twists and turns. Thank you for sharing can’t wait to read your other 📕books .