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MLP-Princess Luna arrives in the human world

Summary

Princess Luna arrives in the human world

Status
9h ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1


Chapter I: The Alicorn and the Storm

Nights on the farm were usually peaceful, almost boring. But that evening, at the edge of the property where the forest trees began to crowd together like a dark wall, the air smelled of wet earth and danger. An electric storm was rapidly approaching, rumbling over the mountain range.

Suddenly, a deafening crash shook the windowpanes of my room. The impact was so strong it made me jump on my bed.

I decided to open the window. The cold, fierce wind blew straight from the mountains, messing up my hair in a second. Looking closely through the thick trees, I noticed a faint glow—a blueish, persistent light emanating from the exact spot where the lightning had just struck.

"I shouldn't go..." I muttered to myself, even as curiosity ate away at me. "Though if it turns out to be an alien, that would be downright amazing."

I bundled up as quickly as I could, slipping down the dark hallway. I tiptoed down the stairs with the stealth of a thief, taking care with every step so as not to wake my brother, who was sound asleep in the next room. Once outside the house, I broke into a run toward the forest before that mysterious light burned out.

As I crossed the tree line, the biting cold struck me full in the face.

"Damn, it's freezing..." I said through gritted teeth, rubbing my arms.

The dry crack of a breaking branch echoed right behind me.

I froze. A cold gust of wind made the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end. I slowly turned my head. For a second, I thought I made out a tall, motionless silhouette watching me from among the trees. The tension in the air grew so heavy that my heart began pounding in my chest. I waited for someone to step forward or say something, but there was no answer—only the whistling of the wind.

I shook my head, trying to convince myself it was just a nocturnal animal or my imagination playing tricks on me. I ignored it and kept pushing deeper toward the source of the light.

The ground had turned into a muddy, slippery mass. When I finally reached the impact clearing and saw what lay in the middle, I stood completely paralyzed.

Was that... a pegasus? No, it had a horn on its forehead. A unicorn then? Not that either; the huge wings folded at its sides defied all logic.

"An alicorn..." I whispered.

The alicorn, with a navy-blue coat as dark as the night itself, lay in the mud. It groaned in pain as it tried awkwardly to pull itself up, spreading its wings with an effort that made tiny specks of light spark around it.

Noticing my presence, it raised its head. Its sky-blue eyes gleamed in the night.

"Who are you?" the alicorn demanded, its voice echoing with a deep, authoritative resonance. "In what strange realm do I find myself? Answer me, mortal! Was it you who dared bring me to this world?"

The storm worsened at that very moment. Lightning illuminated the scene, and the wind wrapped us in a swirl of dry leaves. The alicorn tried to stand to confront me, but its legs gave way, overcome by exhaustion. It let out a frustrated groan and collapsed at my feet, its head falling directly into the mud.

A sudden silence fell over me.

I let out a sigh of relief seeing it wasn't going to vaporize me with its magic, though I remained utterly stunned. I looked at the creature. I looked toward my house in the distance. A fierce internal battle waged between my common sense—which screamed at me to run away—and my conscience.

"Damn it..." I cursed under my breath.

Without a second thought, I bent down and slid my arms underneath its massive body. I tried to haul it onto my back, but I nearly wrecked myself in the process. That creature weighed like a trailer full of hay! With a brutal effort that tore a grunt from my chest, I managed to drag it and carry it on my back, taking clumsy steps over the mud toward the farm.

I reached the barn almost out of breath. I kicked open the heavy wooden doors and stumbled inside. With as much care as my exhausted arms allowed, I dropped the alicorn onto a high pile of dry hay.

"Ah, my back!" I groaned, clutching my lower back as I let out a tragic wail of pain. "I'm definitely not paying for a gym membership for this..."

I approached it cautiously, leaning down to check if it was still breathing. I heard its breath: slow, deep, and steady. It was fine, just exhausted.

Outside, the storm broke out with full force, rattling the wooden walls. I left the barn, shutting the double doors tight to protect it from the freezing wind, and slipped back toward the house, wondering what kind of cosmic mess I had just gotten myself into.

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