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Inventos Japoneses

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Summary

Inventos Japoneses. Parte I

Genre
Other
Author
Joel Esidin
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

I

La voz de lo que no se puede gritar

Quedó en ti, no se puede callar

Todo se perdió, lo pude prevenir

No hay fulgor que entibie mi dolor


Quiero llegar, ir y no venir

Quemar y consumar esta aflicción

Y vos, tu voz, desgarra mi razón

Mi atención de nuevo se esfumó

Cada hora que muero intento extinguirte una vez más


Y un crudo estremecer me dejará sin respirar

Vi morir al sol y al mar

y en mí dormí la sola idea de amar

Y mi alma tendrá razón

Duele pensar en este “nunca más”

Perdí la mitad de mí que prueba que existo

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