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I Can See Your Heart

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Summary

What makes it easy for me to see my heavenly messenger's heart?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

I can hear music.

Stringed instruments are playing.

It is now midnight.

A lullaby plays.

But I cannot see your face.

I can hear your voice.

Tears come to my eyes,

And I take my deepest breath.

You come into sight.

Gentle as a dove,

You come wipe my tears away,

And you take my hand.

In your warmest hug,

You run your hands through my hair.

We shed tears of love.

We shower as one.

You melt the chills from my skin.

You take me away.

And you lay me down.

We go to another place.

I can see your heart.

I can fall asleep.

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