What is your opinion?
The phoniex king
"Good book cant put it down"
The Pheonix king
"I really like this book, adventures and loyalty"
Great
"Great story & story telling. I would like to continue reading this one"
LOVED IT!!!!
"I really loved this story and think it's really good. I have to say that it inspired me to continue to write more of my stories on Wattpad. I hope there's/your going to continue to write more chapters."
A Great Story
"This story is amazing. The plot is a bit cliche for now, but still, the writing style is absolutely wonderful. I love how real everything seems, even if it's in a made-up world. Can't wait for more!"
OH MY GOODNESS
"I was hooked when I saw the preview! This is so good, I'm surprised you aren't being paid money for this book! ^w^"
The Phoenix King
"This story has a lot of good things in it that made me read and read more, This has a lot of potential and I´m excited for the next chapters. Although it only has two chapters, it´s great to see that you can make us readers wait for your next chapter anxiously. My best regards and I hope you continue it soon."
"The Phoenix King" review
"Despite only having 2 chapters uploaded, they were more than enough to hook me into the story and wanting to find out more. I admire your ability of describing the scenery and allowing the readers to visualize the environment. There were very well spelling errors, and your writing style makes your story a pleasure to read. I highly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys a good fantasy adventure story. Well done!"
Amazing
"The first paragraph grabbed my attention and the story refused to let go. I started this story last night and couldn't finish it, so I finished it today. The characters are amazing, the description is astounding, and the writing style is perfect. I haven't read a book like this in a long time, I would gladly compare it to a C.S. Lewis novel. I love the way it read like how you would watch a movie. The description of each part of the castle until you got outside of the throne room. Then hearing yelling before entering and describing the throne room. I could see it all in my head like a movie. I loved it, clearly. (= Thank you for writing this."
The Phoenix King: The Awakening [Book 1]
"This story did not disappoint. The murder of a king by his near kin. The hiding of the prince at the age of one, and his discovery at the age of fifteen, left me hungry for more. I hope the author finishes this story soon! NRF"
Thank YOu
"I love stories with a lot of detail like this. It really sets the scene and the mood. I also love stories with dragons and creatures!"
This has potential...
"I like your style of writing and the way you transition from one character to another even without a double space. Especially when it transitions from Ester to Kain by her looking out the window and by the end of the first chapter I did feel sorry for Ester and Rollan and it speaks a lot you managed to make me like them in so short of time. I like your dialogue, too it's nicely medieval but not too overblown or melodramatic. A few things I have to say which are a bit negative but please just hear me out as I feel this story has a lot of potential. The uncle murdering usurping the throne and the true prince standing up plot has been done to death now, Hamlet, Lion King are just a couple among many. I just think if you could maybe take it in a different direction it'll be much more refreshing as it is endanger of becoming formulaic.(You might have it planned out like this already, so if so, that'd be great!) Two more things, you use 'here' where you should be using 'hear' and forget to put an apostrophe when you have an ownership eg; queen's room. Otherwise, keep up the good work!"
The Phoenix King
"My son would enjoy this story. Flows well,"
The Phoenix King !
"I love stories with a lot of detail like this. It really sets the scene and the mood. I also love stories with dragons and creatures!"
It's a good story so far
"It's a good plot, hate the interruption "
