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Summary

What will Sarah do when a witch threatens to destroy the world.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

The magic was almost tangible. Sarah could almost feel the tendrils of red and blue and green fire's. She hid in the bushes and watched as the witch cast her spells and spoke to the cauldron. The green liquid bubbled from inside the large black cauldron and horrible ingredients were poured into it.

"And with this spell i cast, the end of the world shall be now!" there was a blinding flash and soon the liquid poured over the edge and formed a creature. The longer Sarah waited the more shape the bubbling liquid formed. Eventually it was complete and a grey wolf stood in the place of the witch.

Sarah burst from the bushes and confronted the wolf with her sword in hand. She faced it, brave and unwavering. She slashed and slashed until eventually the wolf melted into nothing.

"Come on witch!" she shouted. The witch jumped down from her perch on a branch and confronted Sarah. They fought until eventually Sarah had the witch at sword point.

"Silly child. you have unknowingly destroyed the world." She cackled once and disappeared. There was a loud rumbling noise and the earth began to shake. In the distance she could see earth rising forming a giant.

And there was no way she could defeat them.

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author

I love it already and it isn't even finished yet

4 years
1
author

Hey! Just wanted to say I’m really loving "Fantast" the world you’ve built feels so alive, and the emotion in your writing really sticks.

I’m a commissioned artist and I love helping writers bring their stories to life through art, scenes, characters, covers, you name it.

If you ever want to see your world in visual form, I’d love to chat!
Discord: melinadlyyy

a year
author

Hello, how are you doing?, what genres are your books based on??

8 months

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