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"A gentle fairytale romance. I found the writing very informal and a little naive - the language is more Americanised than English UK. The tale is satifying as it ends, as do all the best fairytales, with 'good' winning."

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Romantic and Cute

"I thought it was a very cute story. I had a little bit of difficulty with the first chapter, but absolutely adored the second chapter, and everything that happened after that was really sweet; I liked reading once upon a time, and then hearing the story. I almost wonder if you could introduce it earlier without being too cliche. Regardless, well done."

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Very Enjoyable Read

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. I thought it taught some good messages on the real truth of beauty, and recognizing real love begins with a deep friendship. The characters were fresh and appealing. The story flows. beautifully. Keep up the good work I look forward to more by this author."

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