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Cammile

"Such a great book! I can’t wait to read more."

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Camille

"It is a beautiful story, but it can be hard to follow at times."

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This is so beautiful

"So we’ll written I love the plot, I’m on edge to read what happens to Camille "

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Camille

"Its very interesting and I kind enjoy it ,the author should please complete it. I hate suspense"

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Camille

"Its very interesting and I kind enjoy it ,the author should please complete it. I hate suspense"

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I love it!

"The writers imaginative mind is captivating and intriguing enough to keep me glued to my phone while ignoring to eat or study. I can’t wait for the next chapters. This book has to be published."

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Intense Holding to the Light and Faced with Darkness

"Wow this got going and it’s such a good story so far! Intense. Please finish this book! Or at least a few more chapters! "

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Captivating

"Captivating story ! With a very detailed attention to the description of the world thr story takes place in. I can't wait to read the rest !"

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Camille

"I really enjoyed this story makes me wish i was her"

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camille

"Staying strong is one way to tackle what life throws at you. "

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Beautifully written

"Hello Karla, I owe you a review. I believe we swapped books a while back. First, I will start out by saying that though your story is short, (at the time I wrote this), I enjoyed reading it. I like how you start of with the suspense and build up on it. Every chapter flows great leading to the next. I wish they could have done something worse to the monster, I am sure others feel the same, but it is your story. Your method of describing the situations and adding intensity to it is marvelous. Poor Camille and everything she had to go through. When they reach the other world, beautiful descriptions. I am very interested to see how everything else turns out. Keep on writing! Great work! It has been a while since I have read something this good."

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Refreshing

"It was amazing book because of the unique story. I think this book can be a bestseller if you publish it. Your imaginaton works wonders. The language was used was very influencing. I deeply loved the book. It completes every expectation people generally have. P.S. Keep writing! People love your 📚 books. "

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AMAZING!!!

"I loved this book!! The plot moved along at just the right pace, and the love story was one of the best I’ve read. At the start, I felt like it moves a little slow, but it definitely got better as the story went on. Keep on writing, author, you’ve got talent!"

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In the deep water

"This book is the best one I have read in a long time!! "

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painful

"The story is so painful I want her to wake up so badly ...break free like she supposed to. have her mother tell her what's going on, do something this is killing me."

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Beyond the deep water

"The story was amazing "

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Into the deep

"I really like this story. The only thing that I would add is that I don't like the way that Camille seems to like repeating the words that someone else says when they have a conversation. But the story is very good overall. I'm addicted to keep reading"

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Beyond the deep water

"I loved the book. It made me feel like I was in that world with every detail. Had many emotions while reading it. Wishing for more and more. Ready for what's next. You are a great writer. Wish you the best of this world and every other world. "

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Behond the deep water

"I so love this book and will definitely read the second. Got me hooked up since Chapter 1. I’m not really a fan of fantasy, but girl, this is a must read book. Great plot, got my imaginations running non stop and definitely didn’t notice I spent my whole day reading and finishing the book. Love you! Please never stop creating such wonderful writings."

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Mehnnn

"Wow!!! This book was amazing, I'm thinking of publishing a book myself and this just gave me more inspiration. P. S..... This is the second time I'm reading this book "

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