What is your opinion?
Graffiti
"I too liked it but needs to be expanded to make it work in a more powerful way. At the moment it works only at one level."
Chilling
"That last line... Wow. Creepy stuff. It is a great story, with the teenage boy leaving written messages in a bathroom stall for the mysterious "K". I think that this story could be even more powerful if it was expanded. I wanted to know more about why the boy hated life, what his family was like, what his school was like. As it is, I never even got to know his name. Either way, I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest!"
Creepy
"How creepy, that last line just said so much and added another layer of depth to the story. I thought the idea behind this was great and I was curious to see where their conversations would lead, I didn't expect it to lead to one committing suicide. I think you built the tension up well, everything happened considerably fast but it was smooth and didn't seem abrupt and there wasn't a lot of unnecessary information. Great story."
