Prologue
Two Nights Ago
โYou fucking whore.โ He yelled as he started to swing at me. I tired to block the punches. But heโs ten times stronger than I am.
โPlease Caleb.โ I cried as he continued to beat me.
โYou want to flirt with other men. Nobody will ever want trash like you. Iโm going to show you what happens to trash.โ He said towering above me. I kept slipping in and out of consciousness, the urge to let go and be with my mom was coming so easy to me. I felt his hands on me, as he ripped my dress open.
โNo Caleb. Stop please, I love you.โ I tried to fight to stay awake, to fight him.
After he finished, it felt like a knife cut into me. Slowly slipping away, I felt someone pick me up and put me down on a bed. I see this light every now and again, Iโm not entirely sure whether to go or not. But it feels so warm.
โMaโam, can you hear me? Maโam can you tell me your name?โ A voice called from a far away.
โMia.... Mia Rodgers.โ I whispered faintly.
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MAYHEMโS PRINCESS (Hellโs Riderโs MC)
Just finished the completed story on Galatea. Had to agree with a few other readers, the writing and story were horrible. Very immature, clearly lacking experience and felt very rushed. Someone who has gone through years of abuse and rape wouldnโt just sit down in a room and โtell her story so nonchalantlyโ no matter who she is talking to, least of all a room full of men. (Anyone who has been a victim of abuse, rape, working in the medical field and or legal field who reads this will clearly agree this story was unrealistic.)
Then there is an almost 3 year old child who hasnโt been in Miaโs presence since the delivery room, the child is immediately bonded with her biological mother and calls her โmommaโ, like in what lifetime does that happen.
The story is absolutely non-realistic. Please do not write a book 2. I would suggest either doing a complete rewrite of the story or just trashing it.
I felt the story was rushed. A lot of things happened to her but the story never fully cover her and Mayhamโs love. It was more like a friendship than anything else. How she recovered so fast from all the abuse she suffered baffled me but I felt for her to be paired with Mayham the story between them needed to be more developed.
Now I just finished book 2 in Galatea and that was a great read. It was a great story and the ending was lovely. The characters development was excellent too.