Mayhem's Princess (Hell's Rider's Mc book 1)

MAYHEM’S PRINCESS (Hell’s Rider’s MC)

Just finished the completed story on Galatea. Had to agree with a few other readers, the writing and story were horrible. Very immature, clearly lacking experience and felt very rushed. Someone who has gone through years of abuse and rape wouldn’t just sit down in a room and “tell her story so nonchalantly” no matter who she is talking to, least of all a room full of men. (Anyone who has been a victim of abuse, rape, working in the medical field and or legal field who reads this will clearly agree this story was unrealistic.)

Then there is an almost 3 year old child who hasn’t been in Mia’s presence since the delivery room, the child is immediately bonded with her biological mother and calls her “momma”, like in what lifetime does that happen.

The story is absolutely non-realistic. Please do not write a book 2. I would suggest either doing a complete rewrite of the story or just trashing it.

I felt the story was rushed. A lot of things happened to her but the story never fully cover her and Mayham’s love. It was more like a friendship than anything else. How she recovered so fast from all the abuse she suffered baffled me but I felt for her to be paired with Mayham the story between them needed to be more developed.

Now I just finished book 2 in Galatea and that was a great read. It was a great story and the ending was lovely. The characters development was excellent too.