What is your opinion?
Collection
"Quite the short stories. Each one as twisted as the last. Only thing recommended is to add details to some stories due to them feeling very random."
Great story 😎
"I liked it. What more do you need to read a story? This one is just as good as any other."
TALES OF ADVENTURES
"What most caught my attention in its history is the way in which the characters show us a very real life style that we can easily perceive."
Needs More style
"Hey Brittani, I really liked the beginning of your story with Destiny, and all the mysteries riddled behind her at the start. Though, unfortunately, I found the amount of characters introduced at once to be too much for me to handle, and somewhat overwhelming. For example, I met the two men, she got close to them, and all of a sudden she was in a court room after someone died. It was very fast like that sentence. I think as a writer - advice I have gotten about my own writing before - you need to give the reader time between new characters and events. Some things I've seen in others writing is omitting a characters name if they are unimportant, having a crowd talk, or completely avoiding identifying said person. Regardless, it is still very interesting, and I hope you keep working on it. Also, for something to try, add more nouns. I once heard Walt Whitman described them as the most important parts of a sentence. Moreover, work on commas and when to end a sentence. And I hope you found this review helpful. Keep working on it!"
Lacks experience
"The authors imagination are fertile and interesting, however the writing skills, ie. punctuation, grammar, and understanding of building story and characters, is not there. http://learningpath.org/articles/Online_Creative_Writing_Courses_Offered_Free_by_Top_Universities_and_Educational_Websites.html https://www.thoughtco.com/free-online-writing-courses-1098086?utm_term=professional+writing+courses+online&utm_content=p1-main-1-title&utm_medium=sem&utm_source=google_s&utm_campaign=adid-559ea2b1-91a5-49f0-b5ac-207cf77c4933-0-ab_gsb_ocode-603335&ad=semD&an=google_s&am=broad&q=professional+writing+courses+online&o=603335&qsrc=999&l=sem&askid=559ea2b1-91a5-49f0-b5ac-207cf77c4933-0-ab_gsb Those are just a smidgen of the FREE online writing/grammar courses (University) that are out there. It is in your best interest to take some of them; I have. You have the basic idea, but not the tools needed to be an accredited, serious writer with the ability to be of interest to the major publishers. But please keep trying. You have talent. Non Desistas Non Exieris~Never Give Up Never Surrender"
