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DEatH is neAR. Be ready for it. Pitch black. Dead silence. I raised a hand up and try to touch my own face but I couldn't. I can't see where it is; my hands, my face...what's standing next to the bed.

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8yrs ago
Chapters
1
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n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 0

Pitch black. Dead silence.


I raised a hand up and try to touch my own face but I couldn’t. I can’t see where it is; my hands, my face... what’s standing next to the bed.

It's so cold, even if it's just autumn. I reached a hand out to my right side just to check.
Only to catch the air. Hah, lucky though.

I crawl and twist my body back into a fetus position, burying my hands between my thighs. They're warm. I clench my nails deeper into the fabric.

Maybe tonight I'll sleep better, I thought.

It was 2 in the morning.

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